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Prommy_Halibut
LV 1𝔸𝕞𝕒𝕥𝕖𝕦𝕣 𝕎𝕣𝕚𝕥𝕖𝕣📚 “𝚓𝚞𝚜𝚝 𝚢𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚎𝚟𝚎𝚛𝚢𝚍𝚊𝚢 𝚊𝚜𝚒𝚊𝚗 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚒𝚗 𝚊 𝚏𝚊𝚗𝚝𝚊𝚜𝚢.” || Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/prommyhalibut
2020-09-22 Joined United StatesBadges 4
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2yr
Replied to Findmysteryinme Thank you hehe
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She Who Reigns the Stars
Fantasy · Prommy_Halibut
I LOVE your ominous and mysterious writing style! Something about the narration just puts me on guard as a reader, trying to distinguish why the scenes are so mysterious, which really fits well with the tone of the story! In other words, your writing style really glued my eyes to the page! I would suggest shortening some sentences, because some tend to become a run on sentence or they just get wordy. Long, wordy sentences distracts the reader, so I suggest tweaking those a bit. The plot and characters have been amazing so far as well! I'm really hooked by it. Other than some issues with sentences and grammar, I really enjoyed the book so far, that's why I gave writing quality a 5/5! Again, amazing work author! Can't wait to see where this book goes ^U^
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2yr
Replied to IcedMocha_21 yayayay thank u so much!!!
ch 0 6 episode four : another Piscean vision
She Who Reigns the Stars
Fantasy · Prommy_Halibut
2yr
Replied to IcedMocha_21 ooh tulips! i'm pretty allergic to those tho lol
ch 0 7 episode five : she who has never seen a rose
She Who Reigns the Stars
Fantasy · Prommy_Halibut
2yr
Replied to Beng_Hobayan Yayay thank you so much!!! I'll try to review it and fix those grammatical errors. Thank you again for your feedback ^U^
ch 0 1 and so it begins
She Who Reigns the Stars
Fantasy · Prommy_Halibut
2yr
Replied to Anit_14 Yesss an Aquarius! Aquarius people are so chill ^U^
ch 0 2 prologue : the Pisces' vision
She Who Reigns the Stars
Fantasy · Prommy_Halibut
2yr
Replied to Anit_14 hahaha thank u so much >_<
I'm happy u enjoyed it!!!
ch 0 1 and so it begins
She Who Reigns the Stars
Fantasy · Prommy_Halibut
2yr
Replied to IcedMocha_21 Yay! And yes, that sign will be very important later on O_O
ch 0 2 prologue : the Pisces' vision
She Who Reigns the Stars
Fantasy · Prommy_Halibut
2yr
Replied to Easy_Tiger yayaya Taurus!
ch 0 2 prologue : the Pisces' vision
She Who Reigns the Stars
Fantasy · Prommy_Halibut
2yr
Replied to Comfort_Wilson Oh yay!!! Thank you so much! I really appreciate it ^U^
ch 0 1 and so it begins
She Who Reigns the Stars
Fantasy · Prommy_Halibut
2yr
Replied to IcedMocha_21 lol thank u so much >_<
ch 0 1 and so it begins
She Who Reigns the Stars
Fantasy · Prommy_Halibut
Prommy_Halibut
"The eyes of wisdom, the truth unfolds, I summon the two animals, who completes the Zodiac's whole." Asteria waited as her prayer casted a bright light across the blanket of indigo and stars above, a summoning, no doubt, would have awakened the entire Heavens. She knew summoning a Zodiac this late would cause a short panic to spread across the Deities and Angels, for a Zodiac's summon was rarely done in the night unless it was an emergency. However, Asteria felt as though it was necessary that a Zodiac keep her company in that moment. For whatever reason that was, she was hoping the Pisces, the most intuitive of all the signs, might have an answer.
She Who Reigns the Stars
Fantasy · Prommy_Halibut