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And with regard to romance, do not worry, I know you will reach a solution, romance does not necessarily have to be very cheesy, I will also look forward to romance if it happens 😂🙋‍♀️

The title caught my attention and I found it interesting, then I read the story, I liked it but there are sudden jumps in the history of events that happen very quickly (I think that is what the previous comments refer to when they say that it is very confusing, really I'm not very sure, in short it seems very rushed). But I like the general idea that you have an empowered and villainous woman, not so villainous, however it makes me curious as to how you will make her a villain and in what direction the plot goes. As I said before and I repeat I like it, I will be anxiously waiting for the updates, you have great potential, I like your ideas and the characters. Take the time you want, because what really matters is that you feel satisfied with what you write and it does not matter what changes the story undergoes or if you delete it, as long as you come back. We will be waiting for you and have fun this holidays!