Webnovel Author: docaqui - Novel Collection

I gotta say, those first three chaps are steamy af. So here is my honest review: WQ: 4/5 Reason: A little bit of editing here and there especially for the narratives and dialogues and the novel is good to go. Honestly, those were the only problems I have for this novel, which is a good thing for me. SoU: 5/5 Reason: I am a binge reader, my friends could vouch me for that. And seeing that a book have many chaps already is a big YES to me. SD: 5/5 Reason: Fast and steaming hawt. I mean it, at first, I thought that it will just be those typical CEO/secretary affairs but nah, this book caught me off guard CD: 5/5 Reason: I love how the author put emphasis as what the characters taste on people and how much they care about their pride and shenanigans. Truth to be told, not many can show their characters emotions and they cover that lackings on dialogues which is kinda a turn off for me. Coz I need the emotion and this novel have that. WB: 5/5 Reason: My basis for a WB review is how the author describes the environment that the MC or ML sees or locates. And I saw that in the first line of this book. Which is a great help in imagining what is happening in the scene. Overall: 4.8/5 This book is really awesome. It actually hooked me up in the first two chapters and I want more to be uploaded. I am giddy enough to stick around see what will make of the ML or MC before they start to fall in love with each other. Kudos to the author!

Here is my honest review: Writing Quality: 4/5 Reason: There are some punctuations that were not supposed to be there, and some were missing. Especially commas and periods. Some parts of the narration were awkward, but there is still a room for improvement. Stability of UDs: 5/5 Reason: I could see the author has much time to update the novel and for me, that is outstanding. The story itself is intriguing and the updates r helping with the curiosity of every chapter. Story Development: 5/5 Reason: It's slow for my liking. But it's aight. Character Design: 4/5 Reason: It was not clear to me who the characters were. I just know a bit of info from the synopsis, but not much in the novel itself. World Background: 4/5 Reason: It's not as clear as day, but it could be managed by reading it thoroughly. Overall: 4.4/5 Reason: I love reading chaps out loud and some parts of the chaps that I've read already were a bit...yk, I feel out of breath. The novel is intriguing and hella cool. But I just feel that the author needs to look out for his/her punctuations to improve the quality of the chapters. Keep up the good work and wish you all the best.

I've only read the first chapter but it already gave an interesting and promising start. The world background is still a bit vague but the author already did a great job on giving a character bg. Great work!

I've only read the first chapter but it already gave an interesting and promising start. The world background is still a bit vague but the author already did a great job on giving a character bg. Great work!