Ravi_Law13 - Profile

This story has grown so well, I'm loving it. I see that you have improved on your grammar author great job. Your second story arc is killing it but maybe we could get a little more description of France. You have used con artists really well in your second arc and I really felt sorry for Dillon when you made him propose to all those girls. Keep it up! You are doing a great job!!!

This story is looking really promising up to where I have read however I have still not been able to comprehend Dillon's ability exactly. The story is looking like a good modern shounen story, I'm looking forward to reading it.