FernandCelestino - Profile

The story is a good rebirth story. However, the incorrect spelling and simple grammar mistakes makes reading it difficult. I wished the story was proof read as most of the simple mistakes detract from reading exp erience

My favourite webnovel in the app. The story is not unique but the eXecution makes it fresh and very captivating. I just wish the real worLd is more interesting cause the simulation is more interesting

MC has No personality. thE MC is more like a supporting character to annOying Fiona who he Has to save over and oVer again . infuriatingly no development aT all. wasted potential

I love thee series. its easy to read and follow. Thanks for the frequent update. the M.C is A breath of fresh air to other m.c usually in cultivation novels