MirazX

6d

Commented

What is with this one sided rant? When she asked him why he decided to change all of a sudden, I was expecting an answer from the the mc but instead it was followed up by the same one sided rant. This author is new and probably doesn't know how to make conversation between two people...

ch 0 9 A Mother's Undying Love

God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem

Urban · AGodAmongMen

MirazX

1mth

Commented

I thought the 'eye' was the Sumatra continents will and manifestation...

Since he was preparing to summon a Bolt of Transcendence all along, he could vividly feel its presence too. And when it attacked the mysterious eye, Inala connected the information he had gathered regarding it and looked around, observing the walls of water to conclude, 'That eye is an Influenced Region. The Major Treasure that created it must have revealed itself many eras ago. It was probably claimed by a Mystic Empyrean Tentacle. That's why nothing about it is known.'

I'll Surpass The MC

Eastern · Anvelope

MirazX

2mth

Posted

It is dissapointing that the true main character is actually rudra. It becomes more obvious after rudra returns around 600th chapter. He began to strategise and mc of this story follows him around like a supporting character. Also, overpowered loots that are dropped are given to rudra making him more overpowered. I did not read the first novel where rudra was the mc, hence it is really not enjoyable to see rudra getting more focus than max. A dissapointing story. I have dropped it after rudra stole maya-Astra when max was battling ferox.

MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Vampire God

Games · Raj_Shah_7152

MirazX

2mth

Commented

Looks like author is not interested on summoning the truck-kun.

"Your son is diagnosed with a disease, and he had six months to live" the doctor repeated.

Lust System: Monster girl Harem

Fantasy · Crimson_Blue

MirazX

3mth

Commented

I know I am reading unrealistic novels but this is going way over the line. Maybe you could try pulling this stunt when he is at least 5 year old, not when he is at few weeks...

I used all my strength in this baby body and pushed my sister and adjusted the trajectory of the dagger facing me. Dagger went injuring my chest, it was not a fatal injury but I felt strange somehow.

True King's Ecstasy

Fantasy · ElectricLuna

MirazX

3mth

Commented

How can he understand the language? I think the author overlooked this plothole...

It's been two weeks since I've reincarnated in this world. These whole two weeks, I didn't get to do anything because babies can't walk or talk but I still managed to gather some important information about this world.

True King's Ecstasy

Fantasy · ElectricLuna

MirazX

3mth

Commented

He needs to speak to execute an attack? hahha

His thick throat rumbled as he struggled to speak.

I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster

Fantasy · RagingArtPunk

MirazX

3mth

Commented

This is quite unnatural. A hug between children and parent is nothing to be rejected upon. This novel fails to project emotion.

"You can't just embrace your mother out of nowhere. Besides, you're too old for this kind of thing."

Reincarnated as a Son of the Sword Saint and the Sage

Fantasy · Jrmb_Eleven

MirazX

3mth

Commented

Even though they speak , it is still difficult for us readers to understand their emotions.

"So that's what you meant. I thought you were blinded by your lust."

Reincarnated as a Son of the Sword Saint and the Sage

Fantasy · Jrmb_Eleven

MirazX

3mth

Commented

This mc seems like he is too eager to reveal himself as reincarnator and show his stats around. Author needs to realise that keeping secrets gives an air of mystery and adds more spice.

ch 21 Chapter 21: Acknowledgement

Reincarnated as a Son of the Sword Saint and the Sage

Fantasy · Jrmb_Eleven

MirazX

3mth

Commented

sigh. I don't like mc reveling themselves as reincarnator, it's boring. Keeping secrets has it's own charm and spicy.

Chapter 20: Confession

Reincarnated as a Son of the Sword Saint and the Sage

Fantasy · Jrmb_Eleven

MirazX

3mth

Commented

eh? where is the continuation of the conversation?

Kan stood there, dumbfounded by the day's events and his mother's words. The idea of elves, their laws, and their relationships weighed heavily on his mind. He felt like an outsider in this strange world, struggling to understand his place in it.

ALL MY WIVES ARE BEAUTIFUL ELVES

Fantasy · Dark_knight234

MirazX

3mth

Commented

This chapter completely cuts off the connection between the last chapter. At one point his father asked him what Kan was doing there and then we see kan going about doing his hero act. Sigh. I guess being an author and planning a good plot isn't easy.

ch 21 Turning a hero overnight?

ALL MY WIVES ARE BEAUTIFUL ELVES

Fantasy · Dark_knight234

MirazX

3mth

Commented

oh looks like kan decided to stop pretending and come clean...kind of dissapointed that he won't be manipulating other people but whatever ..

"What the fuck do you think you are doing with my mother you cum sucker?! I will make you choke on your own cum and flush you down the toilet with my shit you piece stupid motherf*clear!!" Kan spat with annoyance.

ALL MY WIVES ARE BEAUTIFUL ELVES

Fantasy · Dark_knight234

MirazX

3mth

Commented

Yes. And that garment fulfilled its purpose.

He watched as the lady ignored him and swam her way out of the water. She snapped her fingers just as she got out of the water and a new garment appeared over her. A fresh, new transparent garment that failed to cover anything there of.