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Looks like our little dragon is finally getting out of the nest

just a guess but, was Faith novels, the one with the goddess of life and death?

Q1-) I don't think your story got less fun to read, is just that the action focused chapters like the 2 and the 3 chapter is already over, but don't worry, is still really entertaining and fun to read 2-) I personally didn't found anything that I can point out, I nit a writer but in a reader view your story have no problems in that regard 3-) I don't know if you plan to do that, but in some way, Regis and Alicia could find others reincarnated people, and then for some reason got separated, so the reincarnated would starts telling Reagis who Alicia was and telling her that shes weak, trying to win Regis over, and after everything, Alicia and Regis would have a talk about who Alicia was ( if I remember correctly Alicia reteined her pre reincarnation form) 4-) Yes, I really liked Regis, evem more after this ark 5-) I really love your side characters, while again, I don't really like how pushy Edith can be most of the time I also love her so it's ok, I hope you continue with this, and the amount of them I think is ok, if you keep between 1-3 side characters I think it won't interfere in the story, on the opposite it would make more fun to read wen this specific character are mentioned, and also with this we can see how others character interact with each other

thanks for the arc well I really love your story, my favorite arc so far being her training arc with her parents, and also the first arc in the divine realm ( forgot what the place was called but I think I am right). About this chapter, excluding how Alicia lost because of a grass even being strong enough to kick a mountain flat, I loved everything thing, even the pressure i keeps putting on both character the hole chapter, simply fantastic

well, looks like every on the group except Wolfy, has love problem

I understand, the relationship is not healthy, but trying to but in can make it just worse, the thing is, depending on how Clara try to " fix" their relationship can just make it a lot worst

don't know, what Clara said seams right, but because we read in Shamam perspective we know that what both of them fell is real, so maybe the dependent one is Clara, who is trying to help, to get someone to look at her

I'm loving those reference's in it

soooo, the Elysium Empress is here now hahaha

thanks for the chapter don't know if I completely liked the outcome, you know, I mean I understand that Alicia was having " two battles" while Regis was "completely" focused on fighting Alicia, but really Alicia the possible strongest beaing in the world right know, even if handicapped lost becouse of a patch of grass? Alicia the one who by pure strength could punch a hole on a dungeon wall know to be one of the most resistant things, tripped on a grass and wasn't able to get up? you know her mother won't like that, and more I am really shure her steps posses power enough behind then to simply uprooted the grass, so resuming, I don't dislike she loosing, just the couse of her lost is really dumb considering her power, training, and other previous events

ikuso, I was waiting for this

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter oh god, I am all hyped up now. You know, might as all wait to accumulate some chapters, because this war is way too tense to not read in one go

thanks for the chapter

Oh God, now I can't stop imagining a giant Shiro playing and giggling everywhere, actually Lucifer-sama, that would be a really good chapter, something like that was one of Kiras dreams and she was telling while playing to Shiro

thanks for the chapter. Shiro soooo cool l, shiro soooooo cute, but even after all that I think she will need a little scolding, even if it helped was against Freya words, and while it helped and saved his life, i could gone wrong or something happened to her, in one Shiro would be heartbroken, and in the other the world would see the wrath of the Demon goddess of death Lucifer

okay, forget what I said last chapters, those humans desey no pity, i don't matter if they ar pitiful they deserve to dke the most painful way possible