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Suigetsu_yolo_9736

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smut time?

ch 0 4 Screw him! Screw her! Screw that one too!

The Unnamed God. I'm really Not a God You Guys !

The Unnamed God. I'm really Not a God You Guys !

Fantasy · Zombie

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ch 0 3 Need help ! Urgent ! Summoned a bystander by mistake !

The Unnamed God. I'm really Not a God You Guys !

The Unnamed God. I'm really Not a God You Guys !

Fantasy · Zombie

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Reminds me of bleach. Sounds cool.

A pained grunt breaks the cold silence as a hand forcefully pushes itself through the epicenter of the distorted space, grabbing onto the tear in space, another hand grabs the opposite side of the rift, straining as they start prying open space itself. No more than a few seconds after starting to try open the rift, the space around the fingers starts to crack, a spider-web of cracks extending into the space nearby, illuminated by the pale blue light silhouetting the figure pulling itself from the rift.

Fracture Eidolon

Fracture Eidolon

Fantasy · EldritchAuthor

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"of dread" sounds unnatural.
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Bakemono: 49

Bakemono: 49

Fantasy · YuaMatsui

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this run on sentence sounds weird.
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Bakemono: 49

Fantasy · YuaMatsui

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what is noroi?
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Bakemono: 49

Bakemono: 49

Fantasy · YuaMatsui

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big run on.
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Unaccountable Role

Unaccountable Role

Fantasy · Decree_Woods

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I thought he just got all memories of the body he is in.
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Unaccountable Role

Fantasy · Decree_Woods

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when did the body switch happen?
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Fantasy · Decree_Woods

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I don't like how you are switching between 1st and 3rd person.
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Unaccountable Role

Fantasy · Decree_Woods

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