micheal_armonda

8mth

Replied to DaoistfulKOP

I don't need to be a chef to criticize food, homie.

"Since the exams are so close I will take the time to explain the exams to you once more. The exams are divided into two courses. The first course is the normal college entrance exams. This course is for those who wish to further advance their education."

My Roleplay System

Fantasy · Lagaru

micheal_armonda

8mth

Commented

Author you literally mentioned the word 'exam' 4 times in a row, in a small 20 word paragraph at that. We both know it's a small detail, but it's these little things that separate mature writing from the bad one.

"Since the exams are so close I will take the time to explain the exams to you once more. The exams are divided into two courses. The first course is the normal college entrance exams. This course is for those who wish to further advance their education."

My Roleplay System

Fantasy · Lagaru

micheal_armonda

1yr

Posted

I ve read to chapter 12 and skipped to some further chapters and honestly I'm quite frustrated. What's the point of having a 'first life' and reincarnating in this novel. It feels like it's put there for the sake of having the word 'reincarnation' in the tags, we hardly get to see the Mc's feelings or ambitions from his previous life, what are his regrets? What's moral and immoral for him? There's a reason why most of these novels spend a great deal at building the mc's backstory. I'm pretty the author would explore the mc's personality further in future chapters using flashbacks or whatever, but at that point people would stop caring about his previous life

The Extra's Survival

Fantasy · Mohitkumar

micheal_armonda

2yr

Commented

there is no such thing as a "good" or "bad" cultivator . its just survival . trust me i ve read many cultivation books and most "good" cultivators are hypocrites

He couldn't accept that! He wasn't a bad cultivator back in his days! so, he had no time to struggle, no point in object, as he declared:

Tales of The Mighty Dragonair

Fantasy · ranmaro

micheal_armonda

3yr

Commented

awesome is the last adjective i wanna use to describe someone's butt

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The World Cataclysm

Fantasy · JustAWanderer

micheal_armonda

3yr

Commented

of course

Also, don't be swindled by the Celestial Church's brainwashing. I may be a demon, but I bring only joy wherever I go. Granted it's only meant for women...but huh…in a nutshell, I'm a good guy, and you will bring no harm to the common people by serving me wholeheartedly."

Profane Prince of Domination

Fantasy · Devil_Paragon

micheal_armonda

3yr

Commented

how convenient

Konrad was alarmed. As the owner of the system, he didn't need to comprehend the methods, but he still had a good understanding of their difficulty. The Hundred Flowers Scripture wasn't your run in the mill method. To comprehend it meant talent in both the martial and spiritual paths. And to comprehend it at such speed could only mean that Jasmine was a rarely seen talent.