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Why does he get cold and why is he still sleeping? He is a Dead vampire. They don’t sleep or get cold as they have no need to regulate a body temp.

ch 47 047 Tracking_1

Neptunez_

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If he is already dead, ie a vampire how does he feel the cold. He should be cold to the touch already and since his body doesn’t need warmth he shouldn’t be able to feel cold

He quietly opened one eye, wanting to see what was happening.

The God King waved his hands dismissively, "Yes, yes… follow the plans I gave you, i want you all to be God Kings in the coming years, and then I will be able to impact partial Wills to you all, strengthening your Vaults and preparing for the next moves from the Trickster."

The Primordial Record

Fantasy · BRICKTRADER

Neptunez_

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So chicken and vegetables or chicken and potatoes

As time passed, William had prepared a dish of Poulet aux Herbes de Provence, a vegetable salad, and the bread was already baked. Alice felt a bit bored standing by and asked, "Master, do you think the man who sold the pearls yesterday will really die?"

Invincible! This person has lived for a billion years

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Yeah for someone who wants to experience this new life after waking up he sure doesn’t want to experience anything

What was the purpose of taking on an apprentice? For her to handle these trivial matters, of course. In the future, whether it was buying a shop or other matters, Alice would be the one to handle it.

Invincible! This person has lived for a billion years

Fantasy · IvyWoods

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Arianne

Anxious faces of Queen Aelinor, Princess Rhaenys, Daenerys and others lingered outside the woods, wondering about Viserys' current state.

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Mark that another name for Queen Ariande

Anxious faces of Queen Aelinor, Princess Rhaenys, Daenerys and others lingered outside the woods, wondering about Viserys' current state.

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Also who is Varys? Does he mean Loras?

Seeing his usually confident eldest son, Varys, in a daze, Lord Mace Tyrell, though knowing his own limited abilities, stepped up to boost the soldiers' morale.

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After a battle he just goes to sleep like nothing? What if you get attacked immediately just because you retreat doesn’t mean the enemy isn’t following you

ch 526 Chapter 526: Escape to Storm's End

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So there are many or just a few? Its confusing to state they have “many” and then say, “Not all have been destroyed” which indicates only a few were left

Yet, many of the large crossbows the Stormlands army had prepared remained. Not all had been destroyed in Balerion's initial attack.

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Getting more and more translation errors as we progress

ch 522 Chapter 522: The War Begins

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He was Mys Toyne before now it’s mero?

Mero, leader of the Golden Company, clad in golden armor with a flowing red cloak, rode up to the hill on a tall black steed, saluting Viserys with a fist to his chest.

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Meryn trant was already executed like 20 chapters ago

For Viserys, the most crucial task of the Kingsguard, Meryn Trant, was to protect the Queen and Princess Daenerys, even more important than guarding Viserys himself.

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Who is Rego?

He trusted Rego and Rhaenys to manage King's Landing. His Kingsguard, Mira, was with the queen and princess, ensuring their safety.

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Red and gold

Sir Stafford, donning the black and gold armor of House Lannister, loosened some straps, revealing the lining beneath. Beside him, his sword rested, and he stood, goblet in hand, finishing his drink, eliciting cheers from all.

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Names are getting bad Translator. Have to step up and proof read a bit more. You can’t just rely on GPT

ch 380 Chapter 380: Changing the Hand of the King

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Huh he said it was more like he had double the capacity of a normal adult so how is like 2-4 people?

The stronger the ability, the more difficult it would be to evolve. His mental power had already far surpassed the total of two, three, four, or even more people.

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Given*

That being said I know it is not perfect, nothing is. Weather its my process using termonology that is accurate but not in line with those used in universe, switching up character names randomly (increasingly less now now, small wins people lol), or repeating text from how the translations were processed givin limited maxiumum number of characters that can be translated I know there is room for improvement.