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Aithran

Aithran

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2020-11-29 Joined Global

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Hey author, "till their the..", you have yo remove the extra "the."
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Hey author, Spelling error with "ghe" should be "the"
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Here Author, You forgot the word "say" in the first sentence. "Feng Yu was pained hearing his son say such words."
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Hey author, For the sentence, (..He believed belonged to Feng Zi..) Shouldnt the phone belong to Feng Yu? and not Feng Zi here?
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Their battle will be legendary
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As you can see, Nu Shen thought she was saying Feng Zi belonged to Zhao Huangzhi first so she practically exploded. "Hmph dream on, he never belonged to you in the first place. You better shut your mouth before I silence you," replied a flushed face Nu Shen. If she didn't strangle the life out of that woman today then she would surely cut her tongue out.

Saving the overbearing CEO (BOYLOVE)

Saving the overbearing CEO (BOYLOVE)

LGBT+ · Andru_9788

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You're welcome! Happy reading ^^

A body that was over a dozen metres tall and hard skin. Fierce muscles dominated the entire body. The strongest predator of the Mesozoic Era was in front of us.

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Omniscient Reader

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Author what are drunken prawns? Sounds so good!!
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Which one would he choose, juicy drunken prawns or handsome Male god?

Saving the overbearing CEO (BOYLOVE)

Saving the overbearing CEO (BOYLOVE)

LGBT+ · Andru_9788

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Here Author! it should be, "He would be lying.." instead of "He did be lying.."
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Here Author! "Farewell" , it should be "fare well" Its got to be to be separated, otherwise, it has a completely different meaning.

Wen Qinxi was on pins and needles unable to see the pair of father and son. Judging with Qie Ranzhe's personality, he didn't think the man would fare well with kids thus he followed behind. Unexpectedly, when he reached the cake shop, he was met by a harmonious scene. Feng Xieling was sitting on Qie Ranzhe's lap with his tiny head nestling on his father's shoulder. Qie Ranzhe would occasionally feed Feng Xieling some fudge while answering his questions.

Saving the overbearing CEO (BOYLOVE)

Saving the overbearing CEO (BOYLOVE)

LGBT+ · Andru_9788

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