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no. no it is not.

I only enjoy hair on when it's like two or three women not much more. I can tell from experience dating twins that beyond that it gets tiresome as hell I don't care how strong your endurance is just hanging out with multiple women can be tiresome even though you love them.

I do not believe so, no not really at all. the author was introducing women, lime Harley and Cat woman, etc . . but they didn't rush over to throw theirselves out of or anything they were actually engaging characters.

this book is a total rip off of another book that is a computer cultivation in the computer cultivation book... that this is ripped off from He didn't hit himself in the head with a computer it happened to slightly different way... and some parts have been removed and re-edited this is a much crappier addition

I really enjoyed this fanfiction! The writer has improved throughout this book and it's put up with criticism and decided to continue and get better! While I understand that this is fan fiction, The writer did an excellent job in this genre.I really appreciate it being able to read this! thank you very much for all your hard work! I hope I get to read something enjoyable like this again by yourself!

This book/Story is surprisingly good. it's funny but as an IT professional I like this idea I can understand it I can place myself more in the characters viewpoint because of it. I hope this really does get translated fully I'll spend my points and stuff on it.

interesting and I like main character quite a bit!

nope. I don't want a brain dead story. however I do want a cohesive story that incorporates and shows how the MC is growing instead of assuming he is checking in. There's too much assumption going for this story to be interesting. if I wanted to assume things then it would be fine. thank you for your reply

hi all. I've read pretty decent into the story about a hundred chapters and honestly there's no reason to call this book an idle system or have a system in this book because it's barely used and I like system books when they're well written but if I'm going to have a check in then I should check in if I'm going to have certain capabilities I should be using them a little bit more frequently and I should be using them in ways to reader can understand just to pop up and say oh I've been checking in 80 times in this one place! Then I have a ton of potions to use in this big fight! hmm, well I never read that you checked in anywhere I never read that you did these things I never read that you got this ring of this or cloak of that or who I checked in here and got this book...... I mean seriously man if you're going to write about a system include what the system does sometimes in the chapter so we understand what is going on instead of just dropping on us out of the blue nice try. #dropped.

Not very interesting in the first twenty chapters. No real dream training, very non specific system, leveling etc. Characters are ok, a little bit flat but it is only 20 chapters in . But there something missing if this was a meal it would be a small salad instead of a nice full course.