Astro_young - Profile

You need an urgent partner, and the hand does not quiet you

Majestic work, one of the best, [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Hmm como lo explico, primero sería bueno que subiera capítulos un poco mas seguido no se pero subes los caps después de 20 días y así, segundo la historia deberías hacer que Hades visite el tártaro para que consuma diversas almas y se haga mas fuerte luego que viaje a otros panteones de visita y seria bueno que el foco principal de la historia sea DXD

I like the theme of the world but hmm I feel that you should add a challenge, a war or something that puts the mc in trouble, give it something that puts it against the ropes and evolves on the fly. But otherwise this Super this project. [img=recommend][img=update]

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It's a well-done ff the truth, you introduce systems of other verses into this one so that they can flow without damaging the story, but Ashborn you made him very apathetic, he's Human give him a little feelings and his power scale intervened too much in everything, he looks like a manhwa character haha But in general my criticism is towards the development of the character there is no love or anything of that are well the fights and everything but no mames leads a whole existence fighting, give it more romanticism.

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This good story continues, you are better than other writers [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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