SmartShikhar

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Interesting Conversation between Indra and the rest...

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SmartShikhar

3yr

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I have left some para comments mentioning a few Grammatical and Typing errors. Please check.

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Fantasy · VishalGupta

SmartShikhar

3yr

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First word They should be replaced with The.

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Fantasy · VishalGupta

SmartShikhar

3yr

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interfere should be replaced with Intervene I think.

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SmartShikhar

3yr

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to a one race.

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SmartShikhar

3yr

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or Sol.

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SmartShikhar

3yr

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...one of the Mythical...

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Fantasy · VishalGupta

SmartShikhar

3yr

Commented

Next chapter please...

ch 12 Pearl Harbor, Huwaii Island

Karna The True Elementalist

Eastern · VishalGupta

SmartShikhar

3yr

Commented

Overprotective Jack. What a great Big Brother.

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Fantasy · VishalGupta

SmartShikhar

3yr

Posted

This is a great story about a Girl who fights for her brethren. It has military strategy, race wars, Mythology, action and cuteness. It also has a hint of coming of age theme and is a great read if you like those genres. It's just the initial chapters so no romance yet.

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Fantasy · VishalGupta

SmartShikhar

3yr

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Fantasy · VishalGupta

SmartShikhar

3yr

Posted

After "Supreme Sect" and "The Scion of Soma & Indra" this is another masterpiece. The use of Characters from Mythology, Ancient and Modern History and the little changes to the names of those character make this interesting. It contains Magic, War and Politics. The conversation between characters make it a fun ride.

Karna The True Elementalist

Eastern · VishalGupta

SmartShikhar

3yr

Replied to ReaderMusician

He is the reincarnation of Abhimanyu. That's to be expected.

Abhimanyu The Scion of Soma & Indra

Eastern · VishalGupta

SmartShikhar

3yr

Replied to ReaderMusician

indeed.

Abhimanyu The Scion of Soma & Indra

Eastern · VishalGupta

SmartShikhar

3yr

Commented

Another Warrior reincarnated from Mahabharat times? And it's the legendary Archer Karna! Great.

ch 0 1 East India Company Defeated?

Karna The True Elementalist

Eastern · VishalGupta

SmartShikhar

3yr

Commented

A chapter worth reading!

ch 0 6 A Leaf Blade

Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator

Urban · Ten Miles Sword God

SmartShikhar

3yr

Replied to Wintersatyr

Indeed.

ch 0 6 A Leaf Blade

Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator

Urban · Ten Miles Sword God

SmartShikhar

3yr

Posted

This is a review in anticipation. So far it's good. The world setting is a bit different than usual which makes it fun. The MC's Overpowered natured is described from the first chapter. Waiting for the strategic wars between kingdoms.

Abhimanyu The Scion of Soma & Indra

Eastern · VishalGupta

SmartShikhar

3yr

Posted

Chen Fan is my all time favourite Overpowered Male Protagonist. He is just too awesome! The only cliche I dislike is that he kills everyone but his enemies dont kill his closest family even when he is gone for years.

Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator

Urban · Ten Miles Sword God

SmartShikhar

3yr

Commented

And the despair begins.

ch 0 2 Chapter 2

Solo Leveling(Only I Level Up)

Urban · 추공 (Chugong)

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Karna The True Elementalist

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