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Kyle_Baronet

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2020-12-23 Joined Global

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Another correction here. It’s “thrashing” Not ”trashing”. Just trying to help. Love the story by the way. Great job so far

Level two, was the next stage of his training and Derek wasn't happy to see it, he had finally mastered Level one and would love to dish it out on Steel but who knew the android was this petty, it couldn't even withstand a few trashing from its student, he was technically Steel's student and Steel's action froze his mind.

Merged Soul: Reincarnated in a Dark World

Merged Soul: Reincarnated in a Dark World

Sci-fi · Silver_smile

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The correct spelling is “dodged” not ”dogged”. Please fix for future and past chapters. It’s came up a few times with incorrect spelling.

Suddenly, Steel increased his speed and appeared as Derek was mildly shocked to see him close the gap faster than he could react. Steel sent a sweeping kick towards Derek's foot which he dogged by flipping backward again. While Derek was stabilizing himself Steel went for his deadly combo.

Merged Soul: Reincarnated in a Dark World

Merged Soul: Reincarnated in a Dark World

Sci-fi · Silver_smile

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It’s not “diamonds in the sand”, the saying is actually “ looking for diamonds in the rough”.

After that Liz chose the next stop in their group date, as a magic blacksmith she tends to wander around in the commercial district of the city to look for some things, besides studying and creating new kinds of magic technology she also likes to look for "diamonds in the sand".

Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System

Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System

Fantasy · Barion_Trident

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Hey just as a heads up for future chapters the correct word to be used it “dove” not “dived”. Just wanted to let you know. Great story so far. Keep it up

In the end, Shi Meng added another critical hit. His entire body leaped up like a ferocious beast. He then dived head first, sending his fists attacking like a flood dragon, smashing heavily into the mutant's head.

Global Evolution: I Have An Attribute Board

Global Evolution: I Have An Attribute Board

Sci-fi · Black Eyes White Hair

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Quite a few but its still a good read and better grammer then most on here.

After this, the dean stopped for a moment to let everyone digest what he said while various teammates congratulated the top rankers. Amongst the candidates, the happiest was Ray's team as everyone within the team has found a place in the top ranking. Even Tim, who got the 10th position within the rankings was extremely happy and continuously thanked Ray and even made a vow to follow him to greatness. However, it was not only Tim who made a vow to follow Ray, all of his teammates had come to him and thanked him very much while everyone vowed to follow him as their team leader. After all, the rewards that Ray had helped them obtain by making them reach the top ranking of the special class were nothing short of unimaginable as everyone knew that the top cream of 'Academy For System Users' got the best rewards and techniques along with various artifacts to help them train and become stronger.

Versatile System Online

Versatile System Online

Fantasy · PRO_GAMER_2345

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“Seize” should say “cease” instead. Wrong word was used.

To which his system replied, "Yes, I'm sure of it. I can never mistake that suppressing aura of greatness and royalty and right now it's coming from him. Moreover, he seems to have advanced while giving the test as well. Other than that, there is another aura also coming over from him. It's an aura that even makes me feel frightened".

Versatile System Online

Versatile System Online

Fantasy · PRO_GAMER_2345

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Instead of “top cream” is should say “Cream of the crop”. That would be the proper saying!! Thank you for the story so far. Pretty interesting. Along the way if I find anything to add I’ll definitely comment.

After this, the dean stopped for a moment to let everyone digest what he said while various teammates congratulated the top rankers. Amongst the candidates, the happiest was Ray's team as everyone within the team has found a place in the top ranking. Even Tim, who got the 10th position within the rankings was extremely happy and continuously thanked Ray and even made a vow to follow him to greatness. However, it was not only Tim who made a vow to follow Ray, all of his teammates had come to him and thanked him very much while everyone vowed to follow him as their team leader. After all, the rewards that Ray had helped them obtain by making them reach the top ranking of the special class were nothing short of unimaginable as everyone knew that the top cream of 'Academy For System Users' got the best rewards and techniques along with various artifacts to help them train and become stronger.

Versatile System Online

Versatile System Online

Fantasy · PRO_GAMER_2345

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3,800% not 3,600%. 3,000% from the increase of 300% per 10% god body and 800% from ability 1

Therefore, the divine body that he had achieved could allow him to fight against those of a higher realm. The increase in his combat strength in the perfected state could reach 3600%.

Online Game: Bugged Talent Unlimited Growth

Online Game: Bugged Talent Unlimited Growth

Games · Gori

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