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Turbine872

Turbine872

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2020-12-26 Joined Global

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The orc king is the one who died not the ogre king
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System's POV

Fantasy · Elyon

Turbine872
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Go of not goof

As someone who was unable to gain any kind of items or rewards from Solterra, anything that would give him great benefits was something that he had no intention of letting goof , no matter what.

System's POV

System's POV

Fantasy · Elyon

Turbine872
Commented
There have only been two one on one battles so far not three

After three consecutive defeats, Netero ordered everyone to stop challenging their enemies and retreat a mile away from the battlefield.

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System's POV

Fantasy · Elyon

Turbine872
Commented
Beacon of Hope

"Ah! Before I forget, when the Beacon of Light is lit, stay for as long as you can. You might not see me again for a long time, so make sure to watch me closely using that telescope I gave you."

System's POV

System's POV

Fantasy · Elyon

Turbine872
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'I would have never expected to play a deadly version of the children's game: red light, green light, after ascending to a unigin.' Felix chuckled in derision as he used his senses to gaze into the supermassive menacing eye.

Supremacy Games

Supremacy Games

Sci-fi · MidGard

Turbine872
Commented
Cue Equinox showing up again to obliterate her

"A touching story but do you think that would be enough to defeat me?! Even if my defenses have been reduced greatly, all of you will not be able to kill me! The gods that you have are weakened to the point that one attack from me would be their deaths! Only a Chaos Borne will truly be able to kill me as even the original god of light from this world is unable to!" The Dark Goddess of Light Zehirete stated.

Omega Summoner

Omega Summoner

Games · XiaoKongxu

Turbine872
Commented
Su is the draconic guardian not Alice

The same was therefore Alice who had been brought over. She was the second choice to Su because Su was someone that Rise had trusted to train and share secrets with. However, Alice was a draconic guardian and not a person who could manipulate light mana like Alice could. The best person for the job. 

Master of none

Master of none

Fantasy · 1King_Rep1

Turbine872
Commented
Should be envoy or champion

"Champion Equinox, I have given you the ultimate blessing that I only give to my Envoy of Champion. Use it well as we only have one chance. That one chance will define the future that all of the mortals in the world." The Goddess of Magic Hecate stated as she vanished, and her holy relics disintegrated.

Omega Summoner

Omega Summoner

Games · XiaoKongxu

Turbine872
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Should be dixon. He wouldn’t need to get Rafiki if he was already in the room
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System's POV

Fantasy · Elyon

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She not he
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Fantasy · Elyon

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She not he
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System's POV

Fantasy · Elyon

Turbine872
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"Well met, child," the Shaman said. "I go by the name, Rafiki. What is yours?"

System's POV

System's POV

Fantasy · Elyon

Turbine872
Commented
Should be she not he
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System's POV

Fantasy · Elyon

Turbine872
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Ahould be this place

"Right, I should take all the materials from his place…" He had just spoken when his heart thumped once again. And this time, his Anthozoa, Secret Society, and Dimensional Space all pulsed erratically, warning him.

I Hate Systems

I Hate Systems

Fantasy · Overlord_Venus

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She not he
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Fantasy · Elyon

Turbine872
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Should be her storage ring
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Fantasy · Elyon

Turbine872
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Then there should definitely be more than 5 individuals but the sentence states that there are only 5 individuals

"Taiga, Jasmine, Ariel, P4, and P5, the five of you will use bows and focus your attention on the Warsor Black Hounds if they attack us before the Hyenas arrive," Thirteen ordered. "T6, T7, T8, T9, and T10, the five of you will focus on targeting the Hyenas with bows once they come within your strike range."

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System's POV

Fantasy · Elyon

Turbine872
Commented
I believe all of these Ps should be Os. I don’t remember thirteen getting any P group

"Taiga, Jasmine, Ariel, P4, and P5, the five of you will use bows and focus your attention on the Warsor Black Hounds if they attack us before the Hyenas arrive," Thirteen ordered. "T6, T7, T8, T9, and T10, the five of you will focus on targeting the Hyenas with bows once they come within your strike range."

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System's POV

Fantasy · Elyon

Turbine872
Commented
This feels like it was built for Ark. A Nephilim absorbing this would probably be insane

Description: The Fragment of an Unknown Light God that has been used as a medium for the power of the Goddess of Light Luminaria. It is said to come from the forgotten god of light that was destroyed in an ancient war of the gods. It might be a simple fragment of divinity but even High Gods cannot use it as they please.

Omega Summoner

Omega Summoner

Games · XiaoKongxu

Turbine872
Commented
Definitely should be potions not poisons

"Old man, I managed to make it back safely. Just a little bruised." Remey showed off the small bandages that would easily heal and be taken off later. But this didn't stop the old master alchemist from forcing poisons in to her hand. He was not going to let his one and only proper family member suffer at all. 

Master of none

Master of none

Fantasy · 1King_Rep1

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