Vandumbo

1yr

Replied to Cursed_sin

It's a joke about the time he has, as he has the time stop of The World

The man, seeing Lee going to end his career, joined his hands together and went on his knees. "Please young man, it's my third time failing the test. You are too young already. Let me pass this time. You have all of the time in the world."

In MHA with Star Platinum

Anime & Comics · blazuki

Vandumbo

1yr

Replied to 0_Jordinio_0

Jordi', I ask because I would like to see it and I see you well doing it (sorry if I sound like the thousands of ungrateful readers already present on wbnvl), but will you make a fic' on Overlord?

'Guess I gotta look into finding the Stone of Gelel.' he mused.

Naruto: Systematic Shinobi

Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0

Vandumbo

1yr

Replied to Vandumbo

Good new, Chaotic good is back

To just let him work in silence, and just simply leave him be.

Overlord: The Origin

Anime & Comics · Evrabonzz

Vandumbo

1yr

Replied to Vince_Gregorie

TYPE MOON, or Fate if you prefer, more precisely Fate Grand Order, if you want to find the wiki page of the character, just type Beast III L, and you've got it

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My Upgrades Are Invincible Old/Betrayed/Forgotten/Dead

Anime & Comics · Azazyel

Vandumbo

1yr

Commented

(Check comment for mc pic)

A Superhero Harem? Their love makes me stronger (MHA, OPM, Naruto, OP)

Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker

Vandumbo

1yr

Commented

Okay, I'm almost sur this is Chinese

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Ultimate Gacha System - Hyoudou Issei

Anime & Comics · Summer_Arc

Vandumbo

1yr

Replied to Vandumbo

(that's why people re-write) I wanted to say

Thought on this chapter?

Electro Archon in DxD

Anime & Comics · MuCoffee

Vandumbo

1yr

Commented

"I sent some humans to the plane and all of them died, hahaha." this sentence... I guess the goal is to show what kind of moral the MC has, but... it's a bit (a lot) clumsy. . . The "hahaha" at the end is making it worse, from another POV, MC would just look like 'evil scientist A' doing evil experiments because he is evil. If I had to give you a tip, I would recommand you to read "Annihilation Maker" the DxD fic, just look at how Leo is introduced (you don't need to read until the point were his backstory is explained, it's kind of long), he is evil aligned (and goddawn worthy of it), he consider himself a magus (from Fate, and in this serie the majority of them are the worst of human scum, who would subject even their descendance to the most cruel experimentations to achieve ultimate goal of reaching the root), and yet a loveable character.

Ok, we got sidetracked, this woman is scary in a cute way, and she doesn't mind experimenting on humans. I don't have any problems with that since I have done it, I sent some humans to the plane and all of them died, hahaha.

Electro Archon in DxD

Anime & Comics · MuCoffee

Vandumbo

1yr

Commented

You put a picture of Vitch as the cover, so I dare hope to see her.

First of all this story will be harem but it will have a max of 4 women, and I have already chosen them and for people who wanted sona, rias, akeno, serafall, sry they will not be part of the harem.

Electro Archon in DxD

Anime & Comics · MuCoffee

Vandumbo

2yr

Commented

Have you seen the new Beast from FGO/Arcade? The new Nero?

"Oh yeah! there's also another order from the House of Claudius" Azazel said as he released a sigh.

trololololl

Anime & Comics · CATastrophicWriter

Vandumbo

2yr

Commented

Any of Jordi's MC would do very, very, very bad in The Rising of the Shield Hero

"You're quite the woman," he pointed out, "Very attractive and a lovely personality. So just that, I want to get to know you better, maybe later something more." he couldn't quite stop himself from giving her body a once over with his eyes.

Konosuba: A Scottish Dragon In This Wonderful World

Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0

Vandumbo

2yr

Commented

There is two type of dragons. The lame one and the fortress/mountain-sized one that look better than your bike.

"It doesn't matter, I already have an idea in mind," Yarden shook his head, getting a raised blue eyebrow from Aqua in response, "Have you got anything that will let me become a dragon?"

Konosuba: A Scottish Dragon In This Wonderful World

Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0

Vandumbo

2yr

Commented

I fear the answer

The brown haired man gave a spluttering choking sound and fell back grasping at his chest, "What kind of super normie bullshit is that?!" he shouted, pointing at Yarden and staring at him with dead green eyes, "Are you just some super Gary Stu character that's shown up to make me look bad and steal all the girls?"

Konosuba: A Scottish Dragon In This Wonderful World

Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0

Vandumbo

2yr

Commented

The backstories XD

Aqua stuck her tongue out at him, "You dropped out of school after a rejection and barely ever left the house for years, and the second you did you got overcome with shock by a tractor of all things and had a heart attack out of shock!" she shot back, before gesturing out towards Yarden, "Unlike you, this kid actually is someone we can expect a good performance from. He's only fifteen, but he's a trained martial artist and almost pro sportsman. On top of that, he trains his body multiple times a week, has a job and died while fighting six other people trying to rob him!"

Konosuba: A Scottish Dragon In This Wonderful World

Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0

Vandumbo

2yr

Commented

Another kind of trap, and probably worse than the one we're used to.

While atop the throne, sat perhaps the most beautiful girl he'd ever seen. With a face that could make a model envious, oddly alluring cyan blue hair and a very curvy body that filled out her clothes insanely.

Konosuba: A Scottish Dragon In This Wonderful World

Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0

Vandumbo

2yr

Commented

ono

<Ping>

My new item can raise infatuation, but!

Fantasy · Ru_ri

Vandumbo

2yr

Commented

Remind me of this DxD fanfic whom I forgot the name of, and its main character, Leo, who is the type of character which is able to speak logical BS like he breath.

'Nooo…No, no no! This…this is stupid!' Vritra groaned, 'Yet…why…why does it all line up so perfectly? Why does it all make such sick, twisted, stupid sense!? Why can I see that convoluted plan loving Yahweh actually coming up with something as nonsensical as all this!'

High School DxD: Scotland Forever (Self Insert)

Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0

Vandumbo

2yr

Commented

Uh... My opinion about that is : PLOT. Nothing. Absolutely nothing more than that.

But, to him, it made sense. Sacred Gears responded to the desires of the user, that was for sure. But, affecting another Sacred Gear from who knows where around the world, in the possession of Azazel, while he was within his own mind?