marijam

6d

Commented

It was the Spell that made him a slave, not Cassie. Cassie shared intel with Nephis which in the end prevented Sunny from becoming enslaved to Mordret or another who can perceive attribute information.

"Oh… now you decide to keep your knowledge to yourself. Good, good. It's just a pity that you couldn't do the same on the Forgotten Shore, before turning me into a damned slave!"

marijam

1mth

Commented

During the Revolution that Sunny wished that he had never been a slave to Nephis, it must have started an alternative timeline. But Sunny woke up the next morning stuck in this loop.

"It's hard to describe. I've met abominations who could talk like humans before, but never one who seemed so… human-like. Even among the Defiled. In any case, it looked like he was not happy about being the Dread Lord's slave. Or liked what the Dread Lord has done after becoming the tyrant of Verge."

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

marijam

2mth

Commented

I hope you will write another sequel. The story is great, the world you created is intriguing. There are so many questions I have about where things will go after this - so much potential material to create additional stories. I want to know aboyt Mae and Chet and any of the other females who were so traumatized— if they were able to get back together with their mates or find new ones. How they as a society overcame the sadness of so many mates pairs not being able to have children. Does Zev replace Lerrin at some point? Whether the tribes in the future integrate by animal type instead of anima vs chimera as mating pairs and future generations blur the distinction. Or if there are a lot of unique animal types will they have a challenging time rearranging the heirarchies. If the humans Zev overheard in Thana in the 2040’s timeline are an indication they found a new gateway into Anima (in the future). How the dragon kids can find a way to “fit in” being so unique. If the Bears ever join society. If a Bear can mate with an owl what would happen in winter? . How many of the Creatures actually survived after the two rounds of heart-breaking slaughter we saw, and any Sasha met. What becomes of the family stuck in the big house in the human side. I even want to know little details about how the portals being open to Protectors (and Zan) impact their daily life. Do people in Anima continue to make everything or do Protectors bring things like cooking pots through from the human side? Did Zan(e) create any offspring through all his nights out in the clubs? The Team would want to hunt them down? Also what about the Avatars? Seems like there is so much more to know about that when we catch up to the time they created them. There’s a lot of potential to build on all that you have created.

ch 262 [Bonus chapter] NEXT GEN: Mated

Mated to the Warrior Beast

Fantasy · AimeeLynn

marijam

2mth

Commented

I just had to wonder why they built their secret base so far from the gateway, and why they would not have built the lab around the gateway and given it just as much security as everything else

Sasha looked at Zev, who shook his head in disbelief, but a few minutes later they were racing down the highway towards the Gateway.

Rise of the Dark Alpha

Fantasy · AimeeLynn

marijam

2mth

Commented

This wording makes me nervous

"Take us to the compound, into the lab where our son was delivered. Take us there at a time when he's alone, or if that's not possible, when Nathan is with him."

Rise of the Dark Alpha

Fantasy · AimeeLynn

marijam

2mth

Commented

Recording devices in the sanctuary ?

"I don't know. I just feel like this is all too simple. Like there must be something we're not seeing. Is it really only Nick we have to avoid? I don't know," he said, frowning. "I'm afraid there must be more to this picture and we just aren't seeing it. I really think we should get some of the others involved. See what they say."

Rise of the Dark Alpha

Fantasy · AimeeLynn

marijam

3mth

Commented

All this time he has been so angry that Oriana’s grandfather liked his mother, but here she is alive? This is very confusing.

Arlan nodded, his attention shifting to the hooded woman scrying into Oriana. He recognized who she was but made no move to stop her.

The Devil's Betrothed

Fantasy · Mynovel20

marijam

3mth

Replied to Capara

Foreshadowing that he is connected to it- water will be part of his domain eventually

Jumping down from a pile of rubble, Sunny landed in shallow water.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

marijam

3mth

Replied to Jaeven

But he was eventually going to be enslaved by someone and it would have been a disaster had it been Mordret. Further what she did is what most people would have done after seeing someone murder somebody the way Sunny did, that is, tell their best friend about it.

His first impulse had been dictated by the deeply ingrained desire to protect Cassie… but why were the guards there, in the first place?

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

marijam

3mth

Replied to Jonathan_Howard_2824

It resets on the 1st of every month

ch 1354 By Grace of Dusk

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

marijam

3mth

Commented

Sunny, practice on a less important memory first!

'How do I transplant a new nexus without collapsing the whole weave? How do I ensure that superior essence actually produces a superior result? How do I prevent the less resilient sections of the weave from being torn apart by the increased burden on them?'

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

marijam

4mth

Commented

That’s a super slow sleeping drug!

One hour later, Laura was already snoring lightly.

The Vampire's Love: You Are My Destiny

Fantasy · Lizabelle88

marijam

5mth

Commented

It seems to me perhaps he needs to wish specifically and carefully for things like finding Kai and Effie.

So, he held himself back and made a point of not wishing for anything.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

marijam

5mth

Commented

Sound barrier spell!

And she started moving on his fingers. Her gaze went to the soldiers who were riding ahead of them. Would they turn to look back?

The Alpha's Temptation

Fantasy · MishaK

marijam

5mth

Commented

It’s him

"Are you in a hurry to die or reincarnate? You're impatiently watching someone else's funeral just a few days after you've recovered!"

Fortunate to Have You This Lifetime

General · Hua Hua Liao

marijam

5mth

Commented

Are there 13 million people floating around isolated on rafts in this boundless sea? If they had died already then I imagine the Spell would not have counted them at the welcome? I wonder how they are not dying from lack of food?

Lulled by the sweet promise of a dreamlike future and the gentle swaying of the waves, Sunny slowly fell asleep.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

marijam

5mth

Commented

Makes no sense to replace plants mid winter with snow on the frozen ground. Too much of a stretch to get character alone.

A few minutes later, Eugene returned inside and said, "Miss Eve, I will be going to get the plants from the forest. The plants have died and I will need to replace them all. Is there anything you want me to get for you? Or if you need me to stay here?"