Webnovel Author: QuiteSarcastic

QuiteSarcastic

5d

Posted

Quality = OK-ish. There are plenty of typos and odd sentence structures in the majority of the chapters up to chapter 17. It's understandable, yes, but it's dumbed down so much that every logical action is replaced by the whimsical stereotype of the typical shonen protagonist who wants to bang his sister for some god-for-sake reason. -Stability: Ok. Story Development: There's lots to say about that, but it's mainly summarized in how I described the quality of the fic. Each chapter gives him a magnificent power boost, but the MC never improves. His actions grow dumber and dumber the further in you get. -Character Design: Meh, MC acts like he's afraid to go out the front door in fear of being crushed by almighty entities. -World Background: Cool, MC's world is DC, yet what does that mean? Oh, here's a random ass quest to go to a random world, almost like his chat group's worlds doesn't exist, and he has to cover grounds in a world that comes out of absolutely nowhere. Overall, this fanfic is overrated and does not belong in the top charts where it currently is. The plot is a lazy amalgamation of mixed-mashed worlds, and the author can't nail a single original character personality. They all go along like it is an acid-induced dreamscape where the MC collects his harem of useless nobodies because he needs to collect women en masse. -Harsh? Nah, especially not when the author wants to get paid for this drivel through p@treon.

QuiteSarcastic

5d

Replied to Morg535

And don't forget the fact that his AI already has "Conquered" the interwebs, so to say, and can gather blackmail on one of the richest individuals on his planet while securing him a massive amount of wealth to help secure himself if he only used 0,000001% of "Tony's" overall IQ.

I also need more Chat Points or a bloodline to become stronger.

QuiteSarcastic

5d

Commented

"Immunity" be like:

Based on the description, this potion totally limits the demon's influence on the human body.

QuiteSarcastic

5d

Commented

...Hacked the internet? Seriously? Why would anyone need to "Hack" the internet?

"Have you already hacked the Internet?"

QuiteSarcastic

18d

Replied to Rtanj

Then what stops you from instead changing it from "older brother" to sibling? :P

"Who are you?" I asked calmly as ever, but no response came for a couple of moments before the very same voice gave me an answer. "Let's say that I'm your patron's older brother if I were to use your mortal hierarchy, I do not possess a name but you do and it's quite rude not to introduce yourself."

Danmachi - Eldritch Apostle

Anime & Comics · Rtanj

QuiteSarcastic

22d

Posted

I had to leave a review after seeing so many people take this fanfiction so personally when it reached the top lists. -Writing Quality: Simply amazing. The storytelling is so smooth and mixes well with the characters. There are no typos, and the sentence structuring is top-notch. It is legit one of the top fics on this entire platform in terms of quality. -Updates: Quite often, considering how long the chapters are. -Story Development: From chapter 1 to chapter 39, there's been a constant development among the characters; personalities clash and make the comedy fit so much better. -Character Design: I'd say this is the author's best quality. There are so many different characters, and even if they might not be canonically accurate at times, you get to see dozens of personalities improve and actually turn a bad time into a good time due to the MC's quirks. -Overall, I think the hate this fic gets is unjustified, especially so when "tastes" in a relationship are the crux of the so-called hate. It's a goddamn fanfic, not an offense to a non-existent love life. -Especially so when people tend to look so hard into things that they actually take shit personally. Just skip the R18 chapters if it hurts your ego so much...

Gotham's Dead End Bar

Anime & Comics · Daddy

QuiteSarcastic

23d

Commented

I already feel good about this fic. An author with good taste knows to shy away from such a nightmare-fueled reality such as all the consuming ching chong!

"I was about to leave the house after a Starcraft workout when everything went black and..." He suddenly realized what kind of shit he got himself into and put his hand on his face, "Not Chinese romance, not Chinese romance..."

One Piece: Hunter God

Anime & Comics · MrBlackWing

QuiteSarcastic

25d

Commented

"Didn't I get shot directly in the head while clashing with the enemy army and I been killed?"

One Piece:The Lust System

Anime & Comics · Yass_Odyssey

QuiteSarcastic

25d

Replied to MARLENE_ANGEL

I think the bot had a stroke?

*SPLAT*

Goddess of Ice: Going for One Piece

Anime & Comics · Maerry

QuiteSarcastic

27d

Commented

So... ChatGPT is hard at work huh...

In the grimy, rain-soaked streets of New York City's Queens, a relentless downpour painted the scene. Amidst the murky backdrop, a diminutive figure darted through the alleys, clad in a battered hoodie that struggled to fend off the persistent rain. The faded grey t-shirt underneath clung to their skin, and weathered pants, accompanied by shoes that barely clung to life, completed the ensemble. A worn cloth concealed their face, shielding them from both the elements and the harsh reality of the surroundings—the drug-ridden, alcohol-soaked, gang-infested slums of Queens.

Marvel-Comics: Overgeared

Anime & Comics · Bulale_Abali

QuiteSarcastic

27d

Commented

His grandfather seems to be one of those bullshido grandmasters on youtube, however, he's just a normal soldier who became intimate with the avatar and suddenly got spirit cancer...

But before he was defeated, he was holding Aang's shoulders with his hands as tightly as possible. He somehow absorbed a piece of Raava, the spirit of light and peace and also the Avatar Spirit.

Avatar Legend Of Korra: Two At Once

Anime & Comics · some_writer

QuiteSarcastic

28d

Replied to A_Travelling_Bard

He's one of those... you know, those nasty basement-lurking harem fanatics who believe that a relationship like a harem represents just "Works"

But Scott managed to activate this ability with only a 5% chance of activating, he had to admit, this really was pure luck, mainly because Alex didn't use any Admin power to help Scott.

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

Movies · NunuXD

QuiteSarcastic

29d

Commented

I've read the last few chapters, and I think you are doing well, maybe shift around with how you structure sentences, like "Finally I did this---" Into something akin to..: And when I finally reached this point, I did this---" Which will make it seem more descriptive and less stiff. Perhaps extend the chapters and leave some explanations in a small A/N at the bottom part of the chapter.

ch 0 2 chapter 2

Reincarnation in dxd with some wishes

Anime & Comics · emir_adar

QuiteSarcastic

30d

Replied to NamelessKingSlayer

That makes two of us, and I completely agree. However, I based my reply on the fact that this fic did not manage to reflect her character in the slightest, making her seem like a Dumbledore after saying this calmly: "Harry, DID YOU PUT YOUR NAME IN THE GOBLET OF FIIAH!?"

"I wasn't expecting to ever see one of your kind again. Not after the massive crime that your father committed against this world! You better give me a good explanation Angel!" The Ancient One glared at me as she spoke.

The Fallen Gamer (MarvelxDXDxMulticross)

Movies · StarWaves

QuiteSarcastic

1mth

Replied to TehHawks

A single Skull bash attack one-shotted Pidgey and Red was forced to return her to the Pokeball.

Pokemon: The Advanced Adventure

Anime & Comics · Kris_Tylers_1273

QuiteSarcastic

1mth

Commented

Seriously, why all this backpeddling in regard to information? Is it THAT hard to reach a proper word count without puking out the exact same words over and over?

Even as a bastard, he would do anything to reach the person who could give him a chance to feel the true love of a mother. He longed for maternal love in his life, and it would be his mother who could heal his wounds and traumas from the past two years. Now, discovering that his mother was dead at the hands of his own father's words, he lost her too. Why should he live on, in that hole called one of the most renowned castles in Westeros, Winterfell?

Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic - ASOIAF/GOT

Book&Literature · RaccoonLeague

QuiteSarcastic

1mth

Replied to Mozuto

If you couldn't understand that I meant fanfic and that "Novel" was just me saying the wrong word, and no, when this comment was created, there was absolutely no statement about power levels in the bio.

Fortunately for Toneri, his special chakra mode made such a blow just a slight annoyance. He was bruised quite a lot but nothing was broken or damaged enough to get him out of commission. Rei could only marvel at the hardness of the guy's body. This was the very first time he got a glimpse at the ability of the Otsutsuki bloodline and it had to be said, Rei was definitely impressed. The guy in front of him was far from 'pure' Otsutsuki, yet, the innate strength of his chakra was incredible.