Webnovel Author: SweetRambutan

SweetRambutan

2yr

Replied to EmptiBlank

Bubbly is still rank 1. So, the next will be rank 2. The Lion is rank 1 and if Bubbly reaches rank 2, he will have a higher chance to defeat the lion. Rank is more like level.

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SweetRambutan

2yr

Replied to EmptiBlank

I will take this into consideration. I actually plan for Bubbly to remain pure water type but I think I can do this when the story is a bit further.

ch 21 Chapter 21 - Amazing!

SweetRambutan

2yr

Replied to Nevetos

Well... I actually feel the same but I already write it when I realize this :P

ch 10 Chapter 10 - Skill Upgrade

SweetRambutan

2yr

Replied to EmptiBlank

Yes. When the beast advance in stage (Colorless, White etc), the tamer will get 1% of their beast's stat. The percentage may change when we get to that point. I will need to see how Bubbly's stat amount to later. I cannot put the percentage higher because they will have a lot of beasts later and if the player gets too many stat points, they may end up stronger than the beast which I don't want to happen.

ch 20 Chapter 20 - Beginner

SweetRambutan

3yr

Posted

Hello everyone. I am just here to leave a simple note. I hope many people will like my story. Do give my story a chance and leave comments and reviews after you read it. Negative or positive, I accept everything as all of them will be helpful to me :D Note: This story is obviously fiction. It is not real. Read this purely for entertainment. If you can learn a good thing from the story, that will be good. If you learn a bad thing in the story, don't follow it.

SweetRambutan

3yr

Replied to EmptiBlank

it will be like that LOL :P

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SweetRambutan

3yr

Replied to lady_qiqi

Thank you for your understanding :)

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SweetRambutan

3yr

Posted

Wow~ Amazing. The story flows smoothly and I like it. The world background is amazing. Nothing much I can say since many others had said it. Good Good :D

SweetRambutan

3yr

Posted

Love the story. The concept of technology and cultivation together sounds fun. Just an idea but I hope the mc will be able to combine these two things into one. Like a machine that can help with cultivation. Or a machine that helps with pill making (which obviously will put alchemist in that world to shame because mc can mass-produce the pills) I am not sure if you will go this direction but I have high expectation for this because I see a lot of potential :D

SweetRambutan

3yr

Commented

I think you need to put a full stop or comma in this sentence. It is confusing :) 'Ahh, so that's how. How... I am not good at grammar myself but the sentence sounds better with a stop or comma.

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SweetRambutan

3yr

Commented

Love this <3

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SweetRambutan

3yr

Replied to lady_qiqi

I plan to put a bit of romance but it will be really simple.

Ceylon was a handsome man. Out of the trio, Ceylon had the looks and money. Keith was all about the manly and rough man. As for Adrian, he was not that stand out. Adrian had an average appearance and nothing stood out about him.