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OakFlame

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He picked it up and used his Postulant Tier Inspect Ability to discover. . . It was an ordinary fork. There was nothing strange about it aside from its location.

Conquest Carnival: Two Worlds Collide

Conquest Carnival: Two Worlds Collide

Video Games · MisterFlare

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1-1 pain scale, harsh

"Warning, Conquest Carnival has a one to one pain scale, and is rated Adults Only due to acts of extreme violence, strong language, alcohol, nudity, sexual mechanics, and the potential to gamble with real currency. Do you agree to act by the game's terms of service and enter?"

Conquest Carnival: Two Worlds Collide

Conquest Carnival: Two Worlds Collide

Video Games · MisterFlare

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Rebirth In Unknown Lands.

Rebirth In Unknown Lands.

Fantasy · MunirSM

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"... were tall trees- lots of them"

"Who exactly are the others?." We had been walking for some time now, and all I noticed were tall trees, and lots of them. Miss pissy face and Mr hotshot walked in front, talking animatedly to each other.

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Magical Realism · Riceballs_25

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"... He was a triple threat- tall, ...

I had to lift my head to look him in the eye, he was a triple threat, tall, meaty and annoyingly good looking.

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Magical Realism · Riceballs_25

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"freakin heavy" might sound better to just say "massive"

Hell, he even looked the part, the man had freakin heavy biceps just hanging on both his arms. And this mature look on his fucking face that just spelt integrity. Not to mention the worse part of it all.

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Magical Realism · Riceballs_25

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"... I hate that guy. Why, you ask?"

Yeah, that guy, I hate that guy, why you ask?. Because men like me are the direct opposite of that guy. Men like those looked down upon my kind, like we were the dirt on their shoes.

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Magical Realism · Riceballs_25

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"yet, I felt strong enough to run a marathon!" or something along these lines might sound better

This felt weird at first, because I was just unconscious some minutes ago, my feet shouldn't be this strong already. Yet, I felt stronger than I had ever been, strong enough to go for a run even.

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Magical Realism · Riceballs_25

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the*

"I think so." I answered him, firmly stepping on tht ground, hoisting myself off the bed of white roses underneath me, in one swift movement.

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Magical Realism · Riceballs_25

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