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Cora by the way is a secret agent. She takes information about my target and I'm the one doing the killing. In short, we're partners. We belong in the FIN Association. We only kill people with bad backgrounds that threatened everything. We're not like other assassins who only kill not knowing the reason. We kill because we have a reason.

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Fantasy · Monachre

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1yr

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"So does I" What does that even mean???

"So does I." I said emotionless. I don't want to be involved around him.

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Fantasy · Monachre

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1yr

Commented

This is one of the WORST things that I have ever read on here!!!! I wrote better stories when I was 10 years old! Now I know for sure, Webnovel will let anyone write a story on here. Yes, it needs an editor. The grammar is horrific. The english is bad. But that's not the only thing wrong. Even if the English was perfect, it is written so terribly! It's not just a language issue. Every other sentence is practically an example. The dialogue is unrealistic & just awful! I mean it. I wrote better when I was ten. The author needs to take this down, pay to have it looked at by an editor that speaks English & is experienced, and try again. I'm so disappointed! Author: Be grateful I'm writing this here instead of leaving you a bad, one star review. I suspect that your writing is terrible, even in your native language. Do better.

ch 0 4 My Mate Is A Kid

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Fantasy · Monachre

Eternal_Sunshine4

1yr

Commented

Okay, I'm out. I'm so tired of these Chinese drama stories that take years to finish, have 700+ pages, ridiculous storylines, the couple can go over 100+ chapters without talking after a breakup (which is a waste of money) etc. There are good stories on this app and this sounds like all of the generic ones that aren't.

She was originally the number one killer in the apocalypse which made zombies tremble in fear. An accident happened when her superpower was upgraded.

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General · Peach Three Branches

Eternal_Sunshine4

1yr

Commented

You can't drink " a lot" of alcohol and consent. Also I know from experience. Going 0-100 without being used to alcohol will make you violently ill for days!

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Urban · Miss_Behaviour

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1yr

Replied to Ilovefood

Please don't! This is how you get r***d. So unsafe in real life.

ch 0 1 Checklist

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Urban · Miss_Behaviour

Eternal_Sunshine4

1yr

Commented

So she's an innocent virgin at 25 and goes from nothing to a random night with a stranger? Not realistic! In reality, it would be too chaotic and maybe even too dark to write in a club. She would also start to get sick from that drink. She also doesn't have a safety plan with someone sober being there with her to make sure she is okay. Please if anyone is reading this, understand that this is nothing like the real world and she's so unsafe. Not victim blaming, but she's setting herself in a dangerous position where she isn't in her right mind and is unsafe. She could be r***d in real life. Main character syndrome is real in this story!

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One Wild Night

Urban · Miss_Behaviour

Eternal_Sunshine4

1yr

Commented

Lolz that a girl that's never been to a bqr can order so easily, and not be totally drunk with that drink. You have no alcohol tolerance like that and vodka is much stronger than beer or even wine.

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One Wild Night

Urban · Miss_Behaviour

Eternal_Sunshine4

1yr

Commented

I hate this kind of language. Technically if you used this word, there is no such thing. Borderline woman shaming. I'm still giving the story a chance though.

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One Wild Night

Urban · Miss_Behaviour

Eternal_Sunshine4

1yr

Commented

Ugh! Guys need to stop saying this!

As she reached the table, Jiang Yang asked, "Why are you so red? Are you angry about something?" Before his sister could say anything, Jiang Yang continued with his usual logical thoughts. "Wait! Are you having your periods?"

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Urban · Mynovel20

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1yr

Commented

In real life, if a guy asked me this, I would be running away so fast!!

"Do you want to check it personally? I don't mind it." Lu Qiang interrupted her as his lips curved up and stared boldly into her eyes.

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Urban · Mynovel20

Eternal_Sunshine4

1yr

Replied to diler

I agree! Since we know he dies, it makes the story sadder and it makes it harder as a reader to let it go. Like, he's becoming more "real" as a person. It's not a criticism of the writing. It just is going to make it so much sadder when we get to that part.

ch 21 You Are Crushing My Grandpa's Dream

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Urban · Mynovel20

Eternal_Sunshine4

1yr

Commented

Despite her age????? This is part of the problem. Society teachers us women that our value is gone when we get older. And 30 is NOT old by the way. That was a disgusting comment. We women already have so much pressure, so much unrealistic standards that we are expected to do. Despite this, we are considered lost or old goods as we get older. This needs to stop!

Her black and white dress fit perfectly over her curves, and her high heels added an air of elegance to her noble appearance. She had long brown hair and beautiful features that made her attractive despite her age.

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Urban · Mynovel20

Eternal_Sunshine4

1yr

Posted

This says that this book or comic is completed. It is NOT. Just be warned. I regret all the coins and fp's that I used to read this because it just ends on a cliffhanger. DongDong is the sweetest boy, but the plot....it's one kidnapping scene after another.

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