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Winter_slayer

Winter_slayer

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Gosto muito de ler fanfics, principalmente sobre os meus cartoons favoritos, ainda mais se eles forem originais, lentos com desenvolvimento do MC.

2021-01-14 Joined Brazil

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🇧🇷 Now, I'm not trying to be the idiot who just writes nonsensical shit, but you yourself saying that the MC, someone who knows the entire story of the game, who knows the identity and fate of the body that reincarnated... Are you really me? saying that THIS guy hasn't trained a single day in his life!? Damn, I understand that he, like, wouldn't be super strong or anything (since he hasn't gone through the coming of age thing yet and everything), but shouldn't he at least have minimal muscle tone and combat technique? Again, I'm not talking about anything broken, but just the basics. I know he was a degenerate fat guy, lived in the basement and everything, but you don't need to be a genius to know that it's possible to change your appearance with exercise from a young age. The fat ass? Work out! The weak and effeminate body? Work out? The hair? Cut this shit out! The small penis? This is a fantasy world with damn futas, are you going to tell me there's no convenient magic potion!? But the worst of all is that the author put in the MC referring to himself as a lady. From then on, you can't defend. You can give any excuse in the book, but I don't believe it. The author obviously created this completely absurd and illogical scenario with a mentally retarded protagonist just for the sake of pure script. I'm not saying that the story's proposal is bad (a guy fighting to defend his anal virginity is funny and interesting), but this beginning could have been very different (for the better) and some sentences were completely unnecessary. The MC would never call himself a lady unless he saw himself that way, as a real woman, and not as a very unlucky idiot. Sorry, but I needed to vent. I really hope the story gets better, I really do.

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