Reaper9X9

4mth

Posted

The story was really well written and satisfying to read. I have few real critiques. One, the time progression is handled well. As the MC sleeps the world as we knew it changes when he wakes up and we are updated on changes, but the power he received from it is a bit much. Coupled with the fact that he suffers no real losses the story does seem to trend toward a fulfillment novel. The countercurrent removes any suspense in wondering if the mc will experience anything devastating. The romance also leaves something to be desired. The author seemed to try and find a human-beast balance in behavior, but because of the human nature the romance feels surface level. His partner seems to just be there and in truth isn’t essential to the story except for the very small arc in acquiring a partner. Lastly I’m assuming the novel has reached its conclusion at Chp 1566, and if it has it’s not very satisfying. After all of the unstoppable mc to just end it cause he faced his first real loss is disappointing I would’ve loved to see and hope to see his ambitions achieved after the first major setback despite being at the end(?) of the novel.

Reaper9X9

9mth

Commented

Ayo

Ugh, what are these thoughts?!

Epic of Ice Dragon: Reborn As An Ice Dragon With A System

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

When the wolf finally calmed down, it was probably because it was tired of fighting and needed to breathe. Raydon seized the chance to leap with his lower body while still holding the stick in the wolf's mouth.

Godlike Player in a Game-Like World

Fantasy · GoldenLineage

Reaper9X9

9mth

Replied to Jacob_8890

There’s a anime about that.

''Let's get the sh*t out of him, truck-kun.''

Godlike Player in a Game-Like World

Fantasy · GoldenLineage

Reaper9X9

9mth

Commented

I feel like reborn would be better than reincarnated. Usually reincarnations sorta take over/awaken in a already born body while in his case he spas reborn. But it’s basically all the same

Right here and now, in this room… I have been reincarnated as a baby!

SPELLCRAFT: Reincarnation Of A Magic Scholar

Fantasy · Magecrafter

Reaper9X9

9mth

Commented

If this is modeled off the Americans, there are two corps:army and navy. Planes were so new that they were a corps of the army. Marines knowing Americas history of land battles on continent they never had need to land ashore and so they were a corps of the navy as well.

The Air Force's major commands are:

Reincarnated as an Imperial Prince

History · SorryImJustDiamond

Reaper9X9

9mth

Commented

176 lbs

It had to be said Alexander was no lightweight himself. Standing at 180cm and weighing 80kgs, he could take on almost anyone.

Herald of Steel

War · FerriticMatrix

Reaper9X9

9mth

Commented

About 5’10” for my fellow Americans

It had to be said Alexander was no lightweight himself. Standing at 180cm and weighing 80kgs, he could take on almost anyone.

Herald of Steel

War · FerriticMatrix

Reaper9X9

9mth

Commented

SCHWEEK is a better sound/onomatopoeia than “pierce”

"Pierce." The spear made a soft, dull sound as it punctured through the Adhanian commander's mail and leather armor, penetrating the kidney and sticking 6 inches inside it.

Herald of Steel

War · FerriticMatrix

Reaper9X9

11mth

Commented

He understands what they are saying but doesn’t know the language

'It seems that this family is not so simple. I should do my best to learn the language of this world as fast as I can.'

Birth of the Demonic Sword

Eastern · Eveofchaos

Reaper9X9

11mth

Commented

We often call dense water ice

'All kinds of magic can interact with matter, changing its properties. If Irtu could make the ground elastic, then I should be able to walk on water without freezing it first, by altering its density. I need more advanced spellbooks to understand magic's limits.

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Reaper9X9

1yr

Replied to Reaper9X9

Don’t like how women are slave level submissive. And the strong racial superiority complex

Tyranny of Steel

History · Zentmeister

Reaper9X9

1yr

Posted

This is honestly one of my favorite novels a true hidden jem. I have two irks that aren’t for me but are in the story. One is the incestuous relationships, two is the whole German sympathizer thing. It’s not the whole German unification thing but the German superiority complex gives closet n*** vibes. Basically Germany minus holocaust. Which isn’t bad given the time period per day just makes me uncomfortable at times. Overall great read would recommend.

Tyranny of Steel

History · Zentmeister

Reaper9X9

1yr

Commented

I think railguns are a good start

As such, after exercising and bathing, Berengar drafted blueprints for flintlock muskets and 12-pound cannons. He did not have the time or resources to produce rifled muskets at the moment or percussion locks. Such things required advanced machinery and a chemical stockpile of mercury fulminate, which he was far from achieving at the early stages of his development.

Tyranny of Steel

History · Zentmeister

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1yr

Commented

Tf is the moon orbiting

Matthias waved his hand and with it, the Sun and Moon and Stars appeared to enlighten the land.

I.. Am God?

Fantasy · WashingDishes_07

Reaper9X9

1yr

Commented

Because at this moment, both of their mountainous bosoms were touching each other's. And Kahn on the other side was enjoying watching God's greatest creations in a faceoff with a red tinge on his face.