john_johnson_2651

22h

Commented

He can learn it and use the seal in the cave with many zetsus, it can help change his bloodline

ch 447 Chapter 442 : So Many Complications!

john_johnson_2651

5d

Commented

What a cliche. A boring cliche.

ch 78 The Future of The World

john_johnson_2651

6d

Commented

Gold flames and cero

ch 16 Update

Bleach- Monkey in the Hollow Desert

Anime & Comics · TrapcardD

john_johnson_2651

19d

Commented

I would prefer a longer chapter to your facts

ch 39 Phasing Deer!!

john_johnson_2651

27d

Commented

The first Uchiha didn’t need to transplant eyes he awakened ems after three tomoe, just make his bloodline purer because of his uzumaki genes.

'Wasn't it supposed to progress through intense emotions? Or was my little training arc that intense? Anyway, it is still good to have it. Now how the hell am I going to get a Mangekyo Sharingan? I do not have a close blood relative alive. so I should forget about the EMS. [AN//: Thoughts on this?]

Naruto: Mixed Heritage(Rewrite)

Anime & Comics · Sidecharacter1

john_johnson_2651

27d

Commented

If minato is already genin then kushina should be there already. Plot hole my dear author. Minato and kushina went to the academy together.

'If I approach him, it would seem suspicious. Let me just wait and besides, I could always play the clan card and use Kushina to make our meeting less forced.'

Naruto: Mixed Heritage(Rewrite)

Anime & Comics · Sidecharacter1

john_johnson_2651

1mth

Commented

I don’t think this Elizabethan style of writing is good for fanfics, my dear author.

ch 0 4 Chapter 4

Naruto : Shadows of Resurgence

Anime & Comics · Silent_stiele

john_johnson_2651

1mth

Commented

Screw your motivation, learn to write long chapters

ch 20 Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Rising Shadows: Uchiha's Wrath ( Hiatus)

Anime & Comics · Flowerhead_Evan

john_johnson_2651

2mth

Posted

Don’t bother reading, it’s really average.

The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · Wicked132

john_johnson_2651

2mth

Commented

You should learn to write about all his fights and encounters instead of summarising it

ch 47 Ch. 47

Tower of God: Gamer System

Anime & Comics · ShadowPanda_538

john_johnson_2651

2mth

Commented

No fate please, you can a function to the system where he can add members of his team and they form a party and improve together with missions. It’s a game isn’t it. If you want summoning, monsters of legend can be summoned, like dragons, phoenix, white tiger, balck turtle, qilin. No fate please

ch 29 Ch. 29 Escape

Tower of God: Gamer System

Anime & Comics · ShadowPanda_538

john_johnson_2651

2mth

Commented

The first person pov is making it confusing, sometimes you don’t if it’s the mc’s pov or some else’s, please stick to the generic form of using names

ch 23 Сhapter 14. TaleSpin

Jujutsu Kaisen: Red Priest Pathway

Anime & Comics · Vandalizer

john_johnson_2651

2mth

Commented

Mtcheeeww

ch 29 I have released a new novel.

Itachi reincarnated into a cultivation world

Anime & Comics · Shen_

john_johnson_2651

2mth

Commented

Paint a bigger picture, the whole world in this novel just feels John’s mansion, John, training and Tony

After contemplating for a while, John decided to inform Tony about his Devil Fruit ability, which Tony referred to as "Mutant Abilities". John did not bother correcting Tony's misconception.