DaoistWrC6ED

1yr

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I ABSOLUTELY FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY. IF YOU DONT SHUT THE FUCK UP. THANK YOU!! 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙

DaoistWrC6ED

1yr

Posted

Honestly I haven't read the story yet but I saw in the description that there was no romance. The fact that there is no romance and it is stated in the description and guaranteed deserves a five star review in and of itself. The yell of excitement I give when I saw that was hilarious. The amount of times I've had to stop reading a good story because they introduce romance makes me weep. So thank you Author. I dont start a story until at least fifty chapters but for this story I'm going to break that rule. I'll right another review when I catch up with the story.

DaoistWrC6ED

1yr

Commented

I feel like Kahn needs to put Ceril in a time out after this with all this I am God talk. Let him chill out and knock him down a peg. Cerils getting a little uppity and too big for his britches.

ch 225 The Undefeatable

DaoistWrC6ED

1yr

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Pouldrons = Shoulders Placard = Lower Torso/Stomach Vambrace = Forearm/Lower Arm Gauntlet = Hand/Glove Cuisses = Thigh/Upper Leg Sabatons = Boots/Feet

Before him.. Was a black and red Demonic looking armor that had multiple blistering red veins on the pouldrons, placard, vambrace, gauntlets, cuisses and sabatons.

DaoistWrC6ED

1yr

Replied to Killix_Kreed

I send you a friend request. My username is Genny_E.V.I.L#4417

ch 87 Auction Begins

DaoistWrC6ED

1yr

Commented

if you need a proofreader or an editor, I would love to help. I love your stories and would like to help keep them going and get better.

ch 87 Auction Begins

DaoistWrC6ED

1yr

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DaoistWrC6ED

1yr

Commented

more*?

"Shit! Help me, I need no information shit".

DaoistWrC6ED

1yr

Commented

pituitary gland = a small pea-sized gland that plays a major role in regulating vital body functions and general wellbeing.

The owner felt like his brain was heavy, it felt dull like pounded yam and mashed tofu. It was a freakish comparison, but it was apt for his situation. He felt as if his pituitary gland was put on the burning fire.

Ocean Master

Fantasy · GREAT

DaoistWrC6ED

1yr

Commented

you dont need quotation marks after every sentence

Lila stared at her kid and said, "Young Man, I've noticed your face has altered dramatically." Avoid becoming connected with those prohibited individuals. I don't give a damn if Vincent fails. I just want him to be alive and well. It's preferable to be human than to be a test subject."

Gravity Mage with Level-Up System

Fantasy · Aravind_S

DaoistWrC6ED

1yr

Commented

most likely or take out the most and have it just be probably

About three-fourths of his 500 slot inventory was completely filled, leaving Liam most probably the richest player in all of the game.

Re: Evolution Online

Fantasy · Yolohy

DaoistWrC6ED

1yr

Commented

Is agitated the right word for here? Why is he troubled or anxious over the mounds of gold? Do you mean to say hes excited?

Even though he had faced enough in his life, giving him a calm and steady mentality, he still couldn't help but be agitated a bit at the sight of the three or four remaining mounds inside the cave, all sparkling brightly.

Re: Evolution Online

Fantasy · Yolohy

DaoistWrC6ED

1yr

Commented

livid mean extremely angry. how can the MC be extremely angry with happiness? the word livid doesnt fit here.

There were even several of them and Liam hurriedly pocketed everything, including the gold coins. He raised his head again, his face was now almost livid with happiness and excitement that he was grinning from ear to ear.

Re: Evolution Online

Fantasy · Yolohy

DaoistWrC6ED

1yr

Commented

was a huge staircase *

Griffyth was massive. There were a huge staircase that lead up to the entrance of the school. The school had columns going up at the front of the building. The modern white walls and lots of windows were done in recent years, but Lee Seng never really was in awe. It was just a place he went to because he had to.

Biohuman

Urban · Reiverus

DaoistWrC6ED

1yr

Commented

threw*

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Biohuman

Urban · Reiverus

DaoistWrC6ED

2yr

Commented

Vitriol = cruel and bitter criticism

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My Necromancer Class

Fantasy · Aero182

DaoistWrC6ED

2yr

Commented

Palisade Wall - A palisade, sometimes called a stakewall or a paling, is typically a fence or defensive wall made from iron or wooden stakes, or tree trunks, and used as a defensive structure or enclosure.