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captivating story. love all the characters even the villains. it keeps me wanting to stay up reading. now let's hope I'm not disappointed because it doesn't get completed. that would really suck for a good story not to get complete and a waste of my coins that I keep wasting on novels that starts good but don't get complete. I really like this story and I'm going to have a bit of faith in this author to complete it.

I was wondering why this does not have that many review and it seems that the reviews so far are only a few chapters in or just base off the synopsis. Now bear in mind that this is just my personal feeling, someone else may love this. I will first praise the author for writing. It is not easy coming up with inspiration and I was looking forward to reading to the end but I can not for the life of me get pass the FL, due to the FL development so far. I wanted to give it less stars but i recognize that this could be such a great read if not for the FL being written the way she is up to where I have read. 28 chapters in and It just feels like a female constantly on her period. First she didn't want to married I get that, then tries her best to have him avoid her but turns around the next second and she is jealous/mad at him for giving her space, then worried about him. It is almost like I'm reading a split personality plot. I'm not sure what the author wants us to feel about her and it is making it hard for me to continue reading with her constant misunderstanding/tantrums/jealous and crying. I'm hoping for a strong female lead but all I'm getting is the feeling of enough already with a little she hint of strength maybe?. Don't get me wrong, I think the FL might end up being bad a$$ down the road but I'm too annoyed after 28 chapters to continue reading sadly. the Ml seems precious and the other characters seems fleshed out and good but the Fl for me is making me want to skip her parts when she starts avoiding or accusing him. if anyone had read further and is willing to share if it gets better please do. I really wanted to give this a chance.

I can't remember what name the novel has but I have read this plot on this same app under a different novel name. when I say same plot the story line is identical just the names are different and further along into the story.

Story felt like a few parts get skipped but it didn't take away too much from the story itself since I kind of figure out the gist of it. I want to see how the author explain her not recognizing him in the office or know who what the head of the company looks like with her reasoning for working there in the first place. Is his scare or him in a suit going to be the only way she reognize him? I hope the story doesnt drag since the author already got them reognizing that they slept with each other before the lock chapters kick in. Seems like it as the potential to be a good read but I will wait to see if this is going get completed before spending coins. Fl comes off bold and funny but yet the plot throws her into 2 unreasonable situation and she does goes along making doubt if I want to continue. I've seen too many plots go down that road and I am hopefully for this story not to but also weary

Oh my goodness I couldn't put it down. This is such a fun read so far I hope it gets completed. I absolutely love this novel so far. I usually don't like to use coins on a novel this early because I don't trust it getting complete and would wait for it to be farther along before using coins but I couldn't help it I wanted to read more right away. author has a sense of humor with the writing that I just love.

So far the "female lead" seems to be a bit dumb even though I think the author is trying to give us a strong female lead. It feels like she is just being manipulated the entire time and I say this after reading almost 70 chapters she hasn't come to the realization that something fishy is going on and she is being manipulate by a stranger she met and the guy who is suppose to be her mate (hardly know anything about as well) marks her without her knowing. just feels like a bunch of males pushing their will on her and she just going along without knowing but trying to assert that she's independent and capable. I gave up reading and even with the free read decide to give another try but I'm not tempted to finished sadly 🙃 😩

I do hope this won't be one of those wrong girl fooling everyone with a pregnancy until actual girl shows up. I'm looking forward to see how this plays out but won't bother if it turns out to be another repeat of all the nonsense theme novel over populating the site already. I hate those novel where the supposedly well skilled, take no prisoner, kill without mercy type group would be easily fool to recognize the wrong person. So far writing and story is promising I'm rating base on the 40 chaps so far and to give this a shot and see if I'll be surprise.

Good novel. Funny at times overall it was a good read.