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very nice comment, but wtf, 4 stars for your own work? this gives high hope for your future :D

the novel is good, but the end...not even a day for the end? there is so much stuff missing it would fill over 300 chapters. but the first chapters on his home planet/world a like always supreme. even the way the mc goes in his cultivation, the role of illusion/soul/origin, 5 ropes...i like this novel dearly, but why this end?

this story is nothing behind novels like supreme magus und mech touch. for me this story is interesting in the beginning but unreadable as it goes, not even average read, because i like the setting and wouldnt mind a average story in it, but this is a drop.

almost amazing for chapter 1-1800, around chapter 2000 and more its just amazing now. no skipping anymore. webnovel isnt a good system, but if it helps to grow a author and a novel like this? [img=recommend] i did read the first 800 chapters and did forget about the novel....but did find this pearl sometime later with a lot of more chapters and a story that goes epic. his mother-girlfriend meeting tops anything so far.. a must read

there is a girl with more brain, that tried to capture the mc. his GF now is silly, a hexer from a great background and plays second with him? no dominance play and mostly support? sure, she fits a silly character with more guts then brain. even the mc is not pretty smart, and act often silly. but he is young with mostly no support after growing into childhood.

This is a epic story with a unique background. epic, because of a lot of chapters to read and because there is a universe that feels alive. there are some points, that are maybe weak in the beginning. greatest point the begin as a mech designer with a cheat, a system that catapults a average citizen to a top mech designer seed with the chance to start a new company with no chains and a lot of freedom. but then the story breaks from this and becomes a survival sci-fi story with some mechs. this part brings him knowledge for later designs and build his character and background, but the unique flavor from the start is missing. you may even skip this part and read it sometime later, it is a good read and helps to understand later chapters. about chapter 1200-1600 the story and the background becomes more colorful and there is no need for skipping anymore. if you read this like a han solo story in the star wars universe, and dont focus on the mech design, and enjoy the travel into a new universe this novel is amazing. after chapter 2000 it feels even better. you love mechs? you ask your self, that is life? resonance, awakening, faith, godhood in a sci-fi world...oh on this point i see....the ranking of the mc as a mech designer is like a synopsis of his adventures so far. hope this novel can survive trough the end, i will follow how long it will take. this is a must read, if you like star wars, the books about the gray death legion, the game mech warrior or even star craft. its gigantic and full of life.

you wrote fanfiction before? wow, didnt strike me this way. i see stuff happens then i read your novel, epic anime fights, pictures and some old memories reading and playing games and books about mechs. im pretty sure you read the books i mean to. this is one big plus point for your novel...the well drawn and unique setting, second point is how you implement the spirits and gods, the different species and human society's are well drawn and enough to build a living background like dune or starcraft..maybe more like dune, even starwars and LotR feels a bit lifeless. a bit silly are the human interaction and logic, but your creativity about the universe, mechs, pirates, laws, religions, factions, aliens etc. is a hefty pro. your novel is very unique and the system and the petcat may be cheap tools, but tools that work pretty well. the best moment for me so far is a undead mother meeting her daughter in law in a god creation ritual and her communication. that is life? i feel this novel fits my sight on life, and i feel this novel needs a end sometime, because it would be a waste for this unique and living world to die. there are a lot of novels out there, but even if this novels may be not in the top 3, his strongest point tops the other novels. a real sci-fi world with mechs and some mystery like gods and the riddle of life, your novel is for me in top 3 of ongoing novels and last 1000 chapters are so good, it makes it unique and alive. your word about 10k chapters let me hope for a senior master grade and behind, maybe even a legacy of his design...you know living and fighting in a living mech and become a unity with god like powers isnt a bad read. maybe the story of this one mech from his "heir"? is there a point there the mc awake like his mother? maybe become a undying force living in millions of mechs spread over the universe, teaching pilots and create new mechs with the knowledge from trillions of fights and power of a living god? is there living metal? can you create living metal with a spiritual construct and just feeding it along the way? is the cat lucky something like this? my last questions are just hopes for this story, i would hate a premature end like most of i eat tomatoes novels. (1000 years are like 10 days for gods, and the last assencion of the mc to end of the story is less then on day in "realife" for the mc? wtf) just for reference, i eat tomatoes is maybe my personal number on novel author, but your novel makes a lot of hope, the mc of coiling dragon is more interesting, but your world is more color full. i would like to see it on tv some time later in the future, hopefully not cheap chinese cgi style..and thanks for the early meeting father and son with his mother.

I want to thank you for this awesome novel so far, there are very view chapter i skipped and many new things to enjoy in a fantasy-cultivation-isekai story, but its more then a webnovel, its pretty much on par with wheel of time. there arent many good novels to read, and every new world out there that last with me matters a lot(to me, but im sure there are plenty of others of thinking the same). the human part, kingdom, society, realtionship is fine, but the beast side feels a bit empty. the magic system with the 1-5 tier magic bothers me sometime, where is a huge gap between some lvl 5 spells and i may have missed it, but that makes the difference between the tiers? its not pure power or? i mean how do you judge the scanning spells? its hard to judge the magic used sometimes, and it feels quite distant. but this are minor things, there are to much good things i love unique to this novel, more then i can express in a comment without writing a essay. best part for me is a live like acting mc and his "pet" did you copy this idea from ieT ? then not, maybe disney? i share your dislike with the trash-novels out there, its like fast food..quit fun the first time but its feels so cheap and hollow after some repeats. i hope you write more like this and live a long time.