LibofAl

3h

Commented

Miki or Mika could also be used as endering and slightly embarassing nickname for Mikeal.

"H-honey?" I said with a look of surprise.

LibofAl

2d

Replied to Soapety

I think this look is much better. The muted colors and half mask really work for the more anti-hero or villian like look.

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Being Reincarnated as Izuku Midoriya with a System!?!?!?

Anime & Comics · Soapety

LibofAl

12d

Commented

Ra is a good choice as he is one of relativly few God Kings of said divinity. I can only think of 2, and Ameturasu is the other.

I would like to try my new ^Ra^ Gaunlet yeah I named it after the sun god of Egypt like that one better then Polo Boy or Helios he's cool but Ra sounds better.

Being Reincarnated as Izuku Midoriya with a System!?!?!?

Anime & Comics · Soapety

LibofAl

13d

Commented

This is supposed to be War God though, right?

[World Champion (5)]

LibofAl

13d

Commented

Thank you for the chapter!

ch 16 Chapter 16

LibofAl

14d

Commented

If Qin Xiao doesn't kill at least a 90,000 year beast for this mission I will be upset. If he kills a 100,000 year beast and it fuses with his current rings that would be a great boost to the average ages of his rings.

Task Reward: The Soul Ring of the slain soul beast will fuse with your own Soul Rings.

I've already become a Titled Douluo and now the System shows up?

Book&Literature · Proud fried cake

LibofAl

20d

Replied to xImBlackLegend

I think that it means that it cost 25 atribute points to break his bodies natrual limit and increase his stat beyond 50.

Physical strength 50(need your quantity/2 to overcome your body's limit = 25 points)

Over the years, when Surtr second learned of his affinity for Gravity magic he had forced him to use it on himself like in Dragon Ball. Or the knockoff version that existed in DxD which he could not remember the name of.

The Knight of Ruin(DxD)

Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234

LibofAl

26d

Posted

This story has a lot of potential to be enjoyable. I have enjoyed the current chapters (4) and can't wait for more. I am also looking forward to where this AU differs from the original as the changes so far have provided a great springboard for the MCs developement.

One Piece: The Singularity of the Straw Hats

Anime & Comics · Isekai_enjoyer

LibofAl

27d

Commented

Author you are confusing conjuration and transmutation. Killua is a transmuter that gives his nen the properties of lightning, Kurapika is a conjurer who conjures chains with his nen. Tansmuters change the properties of something and conjurers make things.

Speaking of Conjurer Indra, the one who impressed him the most was Killua, who underwent long-term electric shock training when he was young.

Hunter X Hunter: PokéMon Master

Anime & Comics · INDRATH

LibofAl

1mth

Commented

+1

[Picture 4]

The Immortal in Star Wars

Anime & Comics · DaoistRUH792

LibofAl

2mth

Replied to Onxio

But with blood instead.

"No. During the whole story, I was thinking about how to use my bending here, to break out, but... The First is right, my bending is completely useless here. This is, perhaps, the ideal prison for a waterbender of my level, because I have to constantly use bending to survive. Ah, I didn't think that I would end up in prison at sixteen, and even as a one-armed invalid... now I won't waste a lot of time thinking about how waterbending will help me get out of here. Your words helped me realize its futility in the current conditions."

Avatar The Last Airbender: Not Avatar

Anime & Comics · Vandalizer

LibofAl

2mth

Commented

It wouldn't make sense for a Chinese wizard to cast spells in Latin. Much better analogy than the authors.

The content of the incantations was actually meaningless. Wizards from different countries used different incantations; it wouldn't make sense for a French wizard to cast spells in English.

H.P: My Hogwarts Journey

Book&Literature · Comicstorian

LibofAl

2mth

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 55 55.

The Tycoon Inheritance

Fantasy · Devoted_laurel

LibofAl

3mth

Commented

Take your time. Life is more important than hobbies. If you are busy focus on that, otherwise I will always be happy to read another chapter from you. Thanks for the chapter.

*From me author: sorry for not writing and updating this story, because I am busy and doesn't have time to write.. and also maybe it will be a norm that sometimes I won't write and update this story.. well I'll definitely update and write if I have some spare times... To the only two or more people reading this book I'm sorry, and thank you for reading my book.. to the people who commented and rated my book I appreciate your time to read my book and your suggestions and positive comment. To those who only just browse my book still thanks 😊

Devour X multiply

Others · Daoist_Nothing

LibofAl

3mth

Commented

I like the twist about his parents and it also gives origin to the strange cube, which is what probably signifies the 'multiply' in the title, and sets a potential plot points for big bads trying to get the cube for themselves. Thanks for the chapter I enjoyed it.

The truth about John's parents was just a sudden inspiration..ahaha, I am indeed noober than noob..

Devour X multiply

Others · Daoist_Nothing

LibofAl

3mth

Posted

The premis of the story has potential, especially for those who like OP MCs. The English needs some fine tuning but it is readable and the author has already acknowledged this point. I believe that if the author can sit down and come up with a major problem for the MC to try and fix or a goal to achieve, like one of the Beast kingdoms or a monster from the revine try to destroy the kingdom the MC is currently in, as well as some small problem that can be fixed in just a few chapters, like defeating a stonger monster, joining an academy, clearing a low-level dungeon, etc., then it would be easier to peice together a fuller story line. Author, I hope this story can go far and you have fun while writting it, you're doing great so far.

Devour X multiply

Others · Daoist_Nothing

LibofAl

3mth

Commented

Spirits or Saints are reasonable alternates.

If yall have an alternative name for immortals, quasi gods or demigods to use for this group that isn't 'Servants' then i might use it. Ill curse you with brain rot if you comment servants.

Danmachi: the Great Devourer

Anime & Comics · Xanok_Malakai

LibofAl

3mth

Commented

Expeliarmus is probably one of the longer incantations for duels with spells like stupefy, reducto, langlock, and flipendo all being shorter both in letter and syllable count. Avis, and duro are the shortest incantations to be used in battle or duels with avis being used for distractions and duro being used to turn things like cloths, brooms, or wands to stone.

"It's the shortest incantation among duel spells, and it can be cast the fastest. Using this spell often gives the caster the advantage of taking the initiative in magical duels."