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Barbara_Skura_Ward

Barbara_Skura_Ward

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2021-02-12 Joined United States

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Barbara_Skura_Ward
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Used it 3 times in this short chapter.

"Ileus..." The name slipped out of his tongue and he reached out his hand to touch the painting, which was of none other than Ileus. "It's been so long, I wonder if you have forgotten about me." He chuckled pessimistically and took a low breath, a bit of sadness in his eyes. "Or maybe... if you hate me." 

Sold To An Alpha

Sold To An Alpha

Fantasy · AngelLily

Barbara_Skura_Ward
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The extreme use of “none other than” is so distracting from the story. Seems to be a word count filler.

He drove for an hour plus a few minutes and finally arrived at none other than Calise's home. He parked the car, got down, and shut the door, locking it afterward. His eyes darted around, and without any more hesitation, he entered and walked through the passage which led him towards the brown-colored door.

Sold To An Alpha

Sold To An Alpha

Fantasy · AngelLily

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That would be through

"Be sure to not let them thru." The queen ordered and retreated with the vice admiral and lady in waiting.

The Forgotten Princess

The Forgotten Princess

History · Les01

Barbara_Skura_Ward
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Ahh, but they have magic on their side.

"Sir Dimitri's men are trained 'shadows'. They won't need to fight face to face to win a battle. But they also are monstorous in the battlefield. You won't want to stand against them." The captain said. "For sure, they can seize the west army's camp before miday."

The Forgotten Princess

The Forgotten Princess

History · Les01

Barbara_Skura_Ward
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She is absolutely correct in this

October's lips twitched and her face was on a deep scowl as she glared daggers at him. She then opened her mouth to say words in her icey voice, "It was not easy to work from scratch. I have since worked there tirelessly and sacrificed a lot of sleep just to finish my work. Even if I bleed and cry in blood, it was worth it. I was happy to work and persist into doing something I wanted to do and wanted to excel in. I swallowed my complaints just to pursue a career that I carved on my own without anyone's help! And now I am here where I am now because I made it happen. So, Mr Song, you have NO right to tell me to quit my job that I got with my perseverence and hardwork!"

The CEO's Lovely Wife

The CEO's Lovely Wife

Urban · Marielle14

Barbara_Skura_Ward
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Love it

"Since you're already tired from doing it, give me my utensils for me to use." October flatly said as she gave Lexus an eyeful. "I can't let 'young master Song' tire his hands."

The CEO's Lovely Wife

The CEO's Lovely Wife

Urban · Marielle14

Barbara_Skura_Ward
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Smart move

Leon looked at the vicinity and saw the trail of candies. He smiled to himself.

The Forgotten Princess

The Forgotten Princess

History · Les01

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