fire_pomidor4ick - Profile

did you quit?

In general, the idea is not bad, but the implementation, as is often the case, to put it mildly, horror characters are cardboard and impersonal. As I understand it, there is a world background, but just for show, I don’t feel this whole story at all like a big project. Now I want to say that he has a personality that is surprising for us, but it is very poorly spelled out, he was a man literally less than a day ago, but as soon as he reincarnated he kills people in cold blood, and it would be nice if they were only avengers, they were innocent residents, including children. The character reminds me of Pluto mC fanfic "Eternal in Marvel" he also reincarnated in Marvel is like eternal and considered people stupid monkeys and could kill them on a whim, but even he didn’t kill them just like that, and in general that fanfic had very good writing with a good world background with personal characters and an interesting story, and this story is honestly ... Just rubbish