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Hero of Darkness

Hero of Darkness

Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor

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Hej, thanks for the chapter. I Agree with you. Also if you can explain and reason so well in the comments why do you not do the same in the chapters themself. There is barely any reason described in any of the chapters I have read(ch1-36) for why Minos wants to go out and find connections. Sure chapter 1 has some mentions of it. But there was still no description of the reasoning behind Minos`s actions. until I saw this comment. you didn't describe any of the thought processes. At least you didn't describe nearly as well as you did in this comment.
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The Rise of the Black Plain

The Rise of the Black Plain

Fantasy · RVN_1998

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I agree with what the other reviewers wrote. It definitely isn't the best novel out there. And understand why there maybe exist people that wouldn't like it. But for me, it is the only novel in a long time that I feel I have actually enjoyed reading. I Have read up to chapter 345 as of this review. And except for a couple of chapters between chapter 168 and 174(don't know exactly the reason just had to take a lite break from the story before returning to it), I would say that every chapter has brought me joy when reading. In the beginning, the misunderstanding felt a little(very little) forced. But now a couple of dozen chapters in, the misunderstanding feels to happen naturally to me. And that is a massive improvement. It would be boring to read a story where the author had to constantly take away the Protagonist's brain cells, to create a misunderstanding. Worldbuilding may not seem so great in the beginning, but as the story has moved along more and more details of an amazingly large world are revealed. Writing Quality I would say is good, there might be a few grammatical errors now and then, but I can easily overlook them. Story development is good, the plot moves along nicely, and at a steady pace. Some chapters now and then might be just fillers without plot, and just containing something ridiculous. But the author makes up for that with 3 chapters every day, many of them filled with plot development. Character design is where this web novel shines I believe. As the author himself said, this Is a book about a character going through constant misunderstandings. And to make those misunderstandings happen without totally cutting away half of the Main and other characters' brain cells. Is amazing to me. The only problem that I stumbled upon when reading the chapters was the author's unique writing style, but when I got used to it, it was that writing style that made me enjoy this book so much. If you are hesitating whether to read this web novel or not, at least read the prologue and you will get an idea about the story, characters, and the author's writing style.
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