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Disney_Cloud

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Not a Native English Speaker but Fluent. Have interest in writing Adventure Themed Short Stories.

2021-03-12 Joined Global

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Replied to Nikola_Niko
I'm currently going out of city, so won't be uploading. By the way, school starts at April 11 right?
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Kingdom Of Felicia

Kingdom Of Felicia

Fantasy · Disney_Cloud

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I think you shouldn't put laughing 2 times.

As if insanity had finally taken over, he started laughing, laughing his guts out.

The Seven Calamities

The Seven Calamities

Fantasy · Nikola_Niko

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*was dry?

He was weeping silently, while hugging himself. His eyes were red from crying and his throat dry.

The Seven Calamities

The Seven Calamities

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Replied to Nikola_Niko
Lol.
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Kingdom Of Felicia

Kingdom Of Felicia

Fantasy · Disney_Cloud

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Replied to Nikola_Niko
Actually that's not a typo. I do want 'it' to be there. I think the word 'insane' is not a right fit.
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Kingdom Of Felicia

Kingdom Of Felicia

Fantasy · Disney_Cloud

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Replied to Nikola_Niko
Actually no, as it told you before, you have to be familiar with the previous chapter to understand the next chapter. In chapter 2, there is a dedicated paragraph for those scissors.
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Kingdom Of Felicia

Kingdom Of Felicia

Fantasy · Disney_Cloud

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Replied to Nikola_Niko
Oooooo! Another typo, thanks.
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Kingdom Of Felicia

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Replied to Nikola_Niko
This actually wasn't a typo but you are right. This sentence is a bit confusing, I'll change it.
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Kingdom Of Felicia

Kingdom Of Felicia

Fantasy · Disney_Cloud

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Replied to Nikola_Niko
I don't understand what you mean.
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Kingdom Of Felicia

Fantasy · Disney_Cloud

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Replied to Nikola_Niko
By the way, each chapter almost depends upon another. So if you haven't read chapter 1 or 2, you won't understand chapter 3.

"Ughh! Let me tell ya, I went there to get some leaves to decorate my house, do you understand it now pal? Mangrove cleared all of Milo's doubts.

Kingdom Of Felicia

Kingdom Of Felicia

Fantasy · Disney_Cloud

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Ummm.. No actually he is talking about the forest, where the story started.

"Ughh! Let me tell ya, I went there to get some leaves to decorate my house, do you understand it now pal? Mangrove cleared all of Milo's doubts.

Kingdom Of Felicia

Kingdom Of Felicia

Fantasy · Disney_Cloud

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Replied to Nikola_Niko
Actually he saying Ooooooh! in frustration, so I don't think Huh! would suit it.

"Ooooooo! I do not live here, I live in the kingdom, not this swamp. I've never been here. Got it?" Mangrove stated that he hadn't seen the swamp before.

Kingdom Of Felicia

Kingdom Of Felicia

Fantasy · Disney_Cloud

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Thanks for pointing the typos.

But without a lot of other complications, they successfully crossed the mud part. Now, it was time to cross the vines. Milo's heart almost sank as he saw vines. The vines at that swamp were very far-spread and on them, were very sharp points. But were they also Magical? Milo and Mangrove were about to find about.

Kingdom Of Felicia

Kingdom Of Felicia

Fantasy · Disney_Cloud

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Replied to Nikola_Niko
He did warn him in chapter 1 when the forest incident occured.
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