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Ahh so Ning Zuye is a sister or something of Ning Xue? Would be nice if she became MC's woman too.. poor beauty got the least amount of attention so far.

I get that, but, my point is that a Law of Death doesn't increase your awareness, mental capacity, speed, strength. It allows you to end things and people. His foundation is still his cultivation. And strictly based on foundations, Tang Yin is 100x above him. He took one of Yin's strongest hits with his bare body, unprotected by a Law. Why was he not turned into mush? Cause at some points, the laws were eliminated, and MC landed hits with his top power. A Law doesn't give speed if it's not the law of speed. or strength if it's not the law of strength. So the concept of Death shouldn't make his body, speed and awareness stronger. Whatever it is, a level 10 can't fight a level 100 if that's all you compare. Cancel the death law with control, and lvl 100 should hit like 100 on lvl 10, which is 1 shot. This is my logic here.. If every Law allowed someone to reinforce themselves in all aspects then what would be the point of cultivation? So, that's why it doesn't make sense to me. The way you wrote the fight was inconsistent and lacking in logic.

Perhaps, but he's been shown to be similar to Yang wei in some ways, so i was worried.

As long as you don't introduce washed up socks of Shen Bao or some Harem of his. I don't do well with comparing chars and painting others as MC's for real MC to catch up to.

You should.. too much chinese man.. i always confuse them. So Xinyue is the strongest matriarch. With Menglong being the silent icy one?

Man.. i always confuse them. Is Ling Meyan the disciple of one of the matriarchs? In same generation as Liu Yan? And Xinyue the 3rd, Huiran 2nd and Menglong the 1st matriarch?... These names are so confusing.

One thing is to not go for cliches, another to completely ignore the gap in cultivation realms. Like.. How can the heir even see Tang Yin? And how can Tang Yin not see every movement of the heir? A Law acts on the concept it represents, it doesn't magically make you faster, stronger, etc... or boost your mental capacity. What is even cultivation? Just ammassing spiritual power? That's flimsy..

Hmm? Is it that shen bao guy thay menglong bangs again?..

Lol.. Why even friendzone some emotionless woman who is described as so hot? And then, gathering wives left and right, and talking about loyalty. How cheaply hypocritical and pathetic. She is a good woman, so instead of her, he'll romance that washed up spider girl... Sometimes it feels like the cheap jealousy is more for the sake of comedy than actually expressing something meaningful.

I soooo hate crossovers.. Whenever trash like this happens, it feels like the story is ruined for me. There's no need for more than 1 main char and 1 main harem in a novel. Especially from a novel with Yuri galore that i never bothered reading. Feels like advertising another novel, especially a yuri novel in a non-yuri one. Feels useless, aside from lowering the status of the actual MC and Harem. What's that "She would do anything asked of her?" That's like being married and prostrating herself before another. Sorry, but i won't start reading the other novel due to this, more like, i'll avoid it even more. As soon as this guy showed up with his fancy harem of b..1.chez, the main cast was shown as insignificant rags.

The least he can do is heal their bodies, so he can buy time. While he can't heal their spiritual roots, he should be able to heal their physical bodies and souls through Time reversal. Sure, they could remain crippled, but not in pain or looking like shriveled m0nsters... The least he can do is try to ease their suffering while buying time. That would also give you more leeway on writing the next arcs, since it wouldn't be a critical issue.

That seclusion would end up with those girls dead... he would need to save them first.

I have a feeling you brought them from heaven to earth so MC will have an excuse to actively romance them, hero saving beauty style and dual culti for quick recovery. However difficult it may be, problem is the lack of time, since if Meyan has months, Huiran should have weeks, if even that.

Honestly.. I feel like this fight doesn't have much depth or logic, and i will point out why. 1. Tang Yin's cultivation is much, much higher, several realms higher, so it doesn't make any sense for him to even be hit, let alone thrown back. His mind is Divine, his reflexes much faster, and overall a superior being. And yet, he is pathetic, and getting scared for nothing. 2. A Law is a Law, a concept, not cultivation, and it should only be used to the level that their cultivation allows for. The Heir of Deth being able to contend with Tang Yin's cumulated power is absurd, when taking into account his Law of Control. 3. That strong blow he gave to the Elder should have disintegrated his body, after all, MC is strong enough to contend with 8000 higher world cultivators, and yet he is fighting a small little god in a lower world, and barely damaging him. 4. The Law of Deth should only be dangerous if it touches you, and if it cannot, what would matter is a person's own cultivation. Control neutralizes it, so it should be a contest of cultivators, which feels pathetic if this is all Tang Yin can do at his level. With these points added up, it feels to me that you're trying to force a fight between equals, when they're simply not. There's no longer any distinction between cultivation ranks, and it feels like a forced brawl between a panicked kid and some OP monster... Like the roles have been reversed. I could have accepted if he could have used the Law of Deth to absorb the attacks and erase them, and yet he took a full powered attack with his body with barely any damage. Absurd and hard to believe, also inconsistent.

Well.. Isn't Time magic one of the supreme magics? Can't he reverse time around their bodies and souls?... If he reverses it to a point before they got hurt, wouldn't they be healed? I'm just curious, since that would seem like the logical course. As for magic not affecting spirit roots, why would it matter for Time reversal? Considering all the things he did so far, it should be possible. I hope he won't give up part of his spirit roots, just so he would seem less OP, cause he only seems OP for the curent world he is in. Barely at the level of 4th path cultivators, with plenty of people strong enough to handle him.

Isn't Yuan a spirit king already after that lady pushed his cultivation further?... He shouldn't be stuck at spirit grandmaster.

A month? isn't that too little even for this world lol..

A few spanks would do wonders...

Hmm.. Isn't MC strong and rich enough to get Lyu Lyu out of that place?... It kinda feels like she's forgotten. At this point, it's not even about leaving room for others, since there are many girls that need more development. Even Fang Lan, barely got much attention.