Interiorcrocodile - Profile

It's only a few chapters but a really good read, I like your characters and the concept of your story, this story has a lot of potential, i will keep reading. Good luck author.

Really good chapter one, haven't seen any mistake. Good grammar and unique permise

Trying a totally new topic. We will see how it works out.

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Too many typos, I like the mc so far nothing really to hate but nothing really to love. I want to see, more world background and is paragon city the mail city on the country why? How many cities?