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It's good but there's room for development [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

Last time I just said it's a fun novel, now I wanna write a small review I think if the idieas and data of cultivation and cultures of the new world become more obvious(like realms In the firmament) , showing the bigshots and when the molti character view points being used in it as well as the story kipping a straight path, having some for shadowing in the middle it can become a great epic fantasy novel. Although the idea of the book is not new but the it has potential

It's a fun Web novel but I think if the idieas and data of cultivation and cultures of the new world become more obvious, showing the bigshots and when the molti character view points come to life as well as the story kipping a stight path some for shadowing it can become a great epic fantasy novrl

Is there any other novels from this writer? [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]

I really liked this book. If there are any recommendations for books like this or library of heaven's path I'm glad to here it. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

Thanks a lot [img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

I like every point about this novel but I don't know why resently the obdate is so unstable. 🙏🙏🙏🙏😕😕😕😕😕👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤣🤣🤣🤣😇😇😇😃😃😃😣😣😣😣

I like it its fun[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

It was good at first but it became total boring after that I don't know but when there is no circumstances in the story, it should at list be a funny story. I don't know... its just my oun perspective