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It's just an MTL novel. No need for more words. nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnjjjjjjjjjjjjjhhhhjjjjjnnnnnnnnnnnnjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjhhhhhhh

Because you don't know anything about your own character. One thing I'm sure of is that I'm a better reviewer of novels than you. Is this a big talk, you can be sure these are not big talks. And you are someone who doesn't take constructive criticism. According to my review, you don't know the main character of the novel you wrote, this is How arrogant hahaha. I wish life out there was like this. I'm talking big because I'm not a professional reviewer, but I believe there are fewer reviewers better than me on this site. You went to a restaurant and had dinner, you told the cook that the food was bad, and the cook told you to make the food yourself if you didn't like it.

The skills and abilities he has should have changed long ago with everything else. Writer, you don't understand, he is not a human. With everything he does and I don't understand why MC's mental development is slow. The worlds he went to, the years he stayed there, the lives he observed. Writer, you are just talking nonsense.

MC's character development doesn't work like this. MC isn't even supposed to have emotions. He should just be someone who does everything for his goals. He's like someone who got rid of all his weaknesses. You don't even know the character you wrote. MC is like a 16-year-old teenager. But MC has millions of years of memories, he is a different person than he should be with the memories, experiences and skills he receives from the souls.

That's why I won't read this novel again. I don't have that much free time.