Zeta84

1mth

Commented

The story ended very abruptly. Author should’ve posted couple more chapters to give it a better flow and better ending. There are so many unanswered questions that could’ve been answered and then could’ve ended the story with their wedding. The culprits who tried to kill Hugo Zhen are not caught and there are so many loose ends left untied.

ch 270 Grand Finale

Substitute Bride's Husband Is An Invisible Rich Man

Urban · JQK

Zeta84

1yr

Commented

Abondoning and banishing Castor’s family for a crime that Castor committed is cruel. Phobos sense of justice is flawed.

"Castor will be buried, no matter what he was one of ours but my female and I will not be present. I have forsaken him and for his sin of attempting to assassinate my queen. His family will be punished. I will not be their provider anymore I will be sending them away from our lands to another pack, they have no seat at my table." When Phobos heartlessly utters those words Castor's female loses consciousness and crumples to the ground, I gasp stepping forward wanting to help her but my male climbs up the stairs and clutches my wrist in a crushing grip halting my movements. He hauls me inside and slams the door to our cabin shut behind us.

The Beast's Virgin Claim

Fantasy · Luna Liz

Zeta84

1yr

Commented

Drakho was with Phobos when they took Theia from Cronus’s pack to Deimos pack. So when Deimos and Lumina came back from Italy he was at their pack. Then how come he didn’t meet Elriam then. How come he didn’t find his mate then?

ch 173 Love or Hate - Part【8】

The Beast's Virgin Claim

Fantasy · Luna Liz

Zeta84

1yr

Commented

Such a good book. Good job author 👏👏👍👍

ch 100 Chapter 100

Auctioned Mate's Revenge

Fantasy · Caroline Above Story

Zeta84

1yr

Commented

How come the prequels to this book are not on Webnovel. Would you be adding them soon under this App?

ch 0 1 ONE | CAPTAIN STONE

Scattered Dreams

Fantasy · ambernique411

Zeta84

1yr

Commented

It’s been a while since you posted new chapters. hope you post them soon like today 😄

ch 192 Prove it

The Forbidden Alpha

Fantasy · jpsina

Zeta84

1yr

Commented

What happened to Olivia is really bad and inhumane and no woman should ever go through it. But I guess she was not good fit for Gabe. He deserves an honest and better mate and hope he gets one.

“That first question in itself is a very long story but to cut it short, she didn’t want him. She couldn’t stand the sight of him and when it came to it, she didn’t want to parent him. I think she kept him a secret from you… because she wanted to keep that torturous part of her life hidden from you. I’m not saying it was okay but… I know why she did it.”

The Forbidden Alpha

Fantasy · jpsina

Zeta84

1yr

Commented

She lied to him that she wasn’t with anyone before him and now poor Gabe finds out she’s been with two men and also has a child. That’s heartbreaking. Wonder why she lied so blatantly and now he’ll never know ☹️

“Why did she keep it from me? I’m her mate, shouldn’t I have been told?” Gabe asked.

The Forbidden Alpha

Fantasy · jpsina

Zeta84

1yr

Commented

The nurse told her that her parents and sister died and only she survived. Why is she talking about her sister all of a sudden. Doesn’t make any sense.

Ava. Ava… my… my sister. Why? How? Why did I forget her? How did I forget her? Why didn’t… why couldn’t I remember her? Where is she? What happened to her the night our parents died?

The Forbidden Alpha

Fantasy · jpsina

Zeta84

1yr

Commented

She is gamma it surprises that she doesn’t mind link anyone and alert them and doesn’t even fight. It’s unrealistic.

I don’t see the shadows following me until it’s too late. I was too preoccupied in my thoughts, too trusting of this forest in our lands. I let my guard down and it was too late to shift.