Salty_Crusader

5mth

Commented

So the ghimedri are really just space jews?

ch 277 Retaliating With Under Handed Tactics

Salty_Crusader

6mth

Posted

Great work, keep it up Great work, keep it up Great work, keep it up Great work, keep it up Great work, keep it up Great work, keep it up

Salty_Crusader

10mth

Commented

nice world of warcraft reference

"This wolf still has teeth!"

Salty_Crusader

1yr

Replied to JohnnyReever

found it, thanks bro

Salty_Crusader

1yr

Posted

So far it's pretty good. I haven't seen anything like this fanfic so it's pretty unique. Good grammar and mc doesn't seem incompetent.

Salty_Crusader

1yr

Posted

good stuff, good writing quality, only problem is updating stability and there were times when I thought the author dropped. thank god he didn't, it's worth reading

Salty_Crusader

1yr

Posted

I think the author should continue writing this fanfic. Seems good enough.

Son of Agni ( SI in Avatar: The Last Airbender)

Others · Ghost_84

Salty_Crusader

1yr

Posted

The story seems good so far. Pretty unique and has a decent grammar. The update stability haven't disappointed me yet. Hopefully doesn't get dropped, I see potential in it.

Salty_Crusader

1yr

Posted

This is an amazing story, very original and refreshing. Writing quality and grammar is good. My only problem is that I feel like the mc kind of lost his end goal, like he does things that aren't necessary thus creating more problems for himself. This is might be what the author wanted to achieve, still it's kind of annoying.

Salty_Crusader

1yr

Posted

So Mark's character is kind of confusing. He kills but others aren't allowed to kill? He is kind of irritating with his kind of mindset in the Tower of God setting. Writing quality is pretty good so no problems there, but the characters are kind of hard to relate to.

Salty_Crusader

1yr

Posted

An amazing and unique work overall. Writing quality is pretty good and I'm always eager to read the next chapters. My only problem is the length of these chapters but other than that this is a very nice work. Keep it up author 👍

House of The Dragon: The Vampire Prince

Book&Literature · _oinkchan

Salty_Crusader

2yr

Commented

😅

I wish I could have told him, the expression he might have made would surely be orgasmic.

Salty_Crusader

2yr

Commented

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Salty_Crusader

2yr

Commented

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Salty_Crusader

2yr

Commented

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"Umm… yess… that is very bad… you should stay away from those types of people. Very deviant…" Erina tried to hide her obvious secret. Ever since she first imagined the act of being choked by Tanya, she had hot feelings of wanting to be dominated whenever she saw the latter. Of course, she hid this well.