Vesu_Que

2yr

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I was really really interested with this story not until I reached the point where I don't know what is happening anymore. For S scenes this is indeed good a read the thing that'll make u question is how does the mc's head work. tho he did experience trauma and some sort the way he lives is actually not that different to what he did. and besides that was his ffated alpha, if he did really not want anything with him why still act like he's still hoping, the plot around chap 30+ got me dropping the novel but I'm still thankful the author shared their story for free I'm rreally just dropping an honest review. I hope this won't make u stop writing or discourage u or some sort. Take care.

Vesu_Que

2yr

Commented

I skip most of the time it doesn't have any plot anymore ugh

I kissed his cheek, "I'm sorry. I won't." I chucked slightly as I nuzzled into his neck, "I want you." I looked to Asher as he lifted his head, "I want to be with you. No one else." He kissed me and I fought back more tears. "Let's finish this at home."

Hidden Omega

LGBT+ · K_B_Bloom

Vesu_Que

2yr

Commented

whuy

ch 13 Chapter 13

Hidden Omega

LGBT+ · K_B_Bloom

Vesu_Que

2yr

Commented

😇

"Yes, Wes! Give me more!" the boy below me cried as I slammed into him. His thin build, feminine cries, and shaking made him the perfect Omega. As I moved faster, he cried out and continued begging me to give him more and move faster. "I can't hold it, Wes! It's too good!"

Hidden Omega

LGBT+ · K_B_Bloom

Vesu_Que

2yr

Commented

a dog

As he was lost in his thoughts, the black wolf pup in front of him was happily enjoying the wind hitting his face. His tongue dangled out of his mouth as his eyes squinted with mirth.