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If I had to say one thing bad is that the author over explains everything. While I understand that there are times that there should be explanations it's better not to shove in every piece of info you can. While the information dump is smooth there is too much inner dialogue with himself. Please just summarize like saying he was having trouble thinking. Or like there were too many good items. No need to say everything all at once. We don't need to know every little detail of everything.

It's an okay novel. The story progression is fine but unfortunately is not immersive so we really don't get the tension that comes along or if we do it's very weak. The story is very simplistic in the sense there really isn't anything complicated nor are there any underlying things that make it more alive. The characters are weak and the author should've spent more time building them up. He kind of just throws in characters and gives brief scenes of them just so we can get an idea of their personality. It's not very well fleshed out and their rather paper thin. The characters need fire in them or co-ops together so that we get a firmer idea of them. Even the mc feels like a piece of paper. I believe if the author corrected these mistakes and gave more through in-depth detail of the events that happen with the mc then it would be better. Like don't go too fast over something but make it so that it's interesting. Especially make the characters interact more and have more events so we see more and more of them. If that's done then I genuinely believe this novel can be one of the best stories. For now though, it's disappointing to see the potential wasted

A great novel to read but there are a few flaws that make it less interesting or just waste chapters. So the mc themselves is not bad and it is quite interesting seeing what he does and the story progression is interesting. The problem I see is that there are a lot of unnecessary pov chapters. I have nothing against pov chapters but the problem is that the characters getting pov chapters aren't interesting enough to keep reading. Maybe it's for progression of the plot but I think it'd be better to reduce or just keep some side chapters and take out other ones. At times I find myself skipping these side chapters especially during the fight scenes. There's just way too much chapters for the fight scene or for any side character really.

It's a good story to read and the development of the plot is great. The only bad thing is that it's super slow and it's difficult to maintain certain interests unless you like slow burns. Another thing I also want to say is that the mc is really not a villain so I don't get why there's a villain tag. I have yet to see the mc commit something truly atrocious. Perhaps the only thing close to one is his killing the possessed humans but even then there was an excuse and, to be honest, he felt sympathy. I really don't see how this twists into a villain unless he is transforming into one. It's just quite difficult for me to see such contrasting behaviors as he is fine with killing but later there has to be a chapter devoted to his moral dilemma. Very annoying because this has happened in every incident he has killed someone. He literally can't make up his mind on his principles and frankly, it's getting on my nerves.

Does anyone know what happened to the author? The story is really good and I don't want it to stop. If they are sick I hope that they're feeling better. If they're not coming back, best wishes!

Ah, I am also a bit curious as to why he cares about humanity, to be honest. He genuinely seems more like a person who could care less about everyone except his loyal subordinates. His mindset is absolutely cold and ensures that almost no sentimentality clouds his thoughts so it's really confusing. It just brings up the question of why does he care about humanity? That goal in itself does not align with the mc personality. At least to me.

Where'd you get the source of information? I wanna make sure if it's true

Overall I think the story is not bad but to be honest it's not exciting. It's funny with all the comedy but a lot of the characters seem to be a bit... too nice? The ones that appear to be ok with killing are the older people and the younger people in the novel seem to be against killing. I expected a more toxic environment considering there are limited resources and with such a competitive world people are bound to be different. To me, it seems the mc is too relaxed about the world and I know he understands that it's a dog-eat-dog world and he values life too much. Like he just helps someone who formerly had killing intent and seemed like they were about to kill him. They were a nice person but what I'm questioning is how you get to such a level of power and still be nice. You step over people when you compete for resources and he just doesn't seem to have the ambition to do so. Just not my cup of tea I guess.

The bloodline does bring emotions of love and he does do behind the scenes stuff to make them fall in love with him. At the very least he doesn’t treat them like their trophies like most harem novels and tries to have a genuine love relationship. A lot of harem mcs really only their for the lust so it’s a bit refreshing to see scenes where mc actually cares.

Overall this novel is great at explaining mechas and military tactics. It isn't repetitive but I don't necessarily think the author should go into depth with a slice of life. Mainly because we do know the mc character but the entire novel is more like a documentary due to the little dialogue. It's more for people who want mechas and military-style type of reading. Attempting a slice of life would be good if there were more convos or something like that. The entire novel is a bit bland since there are hardly any interactions. If anything, it's just a straightforward novel that focuses on the mc's skills and just kind of documents his life.

If you actually read the entire description about the chip you would also know that there is also one in the brain that can be triggered whenever obeying orders. I don't know if it releases endorphins but it does make the controlled happier. It's a psychological trick that eventually will wear someone down. It's like with pain when you touch a fire it hurts, you keep touching it still hurts. Your brain has now registered fire=pain so now you won't touch fire anymore. Same concept

I've read half the book and I really like how it's going right now. The only thing I want is for the other countries to be shown as well. I don't know if they're shown eventually but it's like the author is presenting China as the only country that is involved in the other world. The only time other countries were presented was in characters who were portrayed as villains. Also, there isn't really much character design on everyone though I think it's just because he barely consistently interacts with people.

Honestly, this is a very good novel if you want something solely focused on just action and adventure. There aren't, unfortunately, any other aspects that really appeal to me. For example, the character in the novel isn't introduced as quickly. By that I mean I don't understand much of their character and it takes a long time for them to even ever show up again. Even then I'll have to really read even more chapters to understand who they're. It's just tedious and honestly, the other characters don't have..... a lot of reactions. Not to be rude, but it's like a child's story where they'll describe it and we'll know what happens. But we'll never truly enjoy all aspects of the story. Other than that it's not a bad novel.