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Oh boy! It’s on! Look out Lucy!😄

It’s so clear so far that Lu is the somewhat shy and timid introvert and Sonia in comparison is the wild let it flow extrovert challenging life! Am truly loving this story and the hilarious situations that both prime characters are able to create with there counterparts. Tom is playing his part like a first fiddle in a symphony orchestra! Lu has no idea what is going on! Lovin it! In it for the long run. Allison🥰

I notice you have bee using the word “sits” when Veronica and Daniel are in the cafeteria consistently. The proper word is seats if you do a rewrite or corrections.

If you should ever re-edit this story throughout this story you use him, her and his in thr opposite gender reference. Otherwise this is one of the best stories I have read on the net.