Abused_Eve - Profile

Not your preferred language? Here to Choose your language.
Abused_Eve

Abused_Eve

LV 2

I like: GL, Kingdom building, Dark, Corrupted protagonist, Action, Psychological. I also like richly written side character, villains and bad guys. I don't like: BL, Harem, nonsense and Chinese novel.

2021-05-01 Joined Global

Badges 6

Moments 268

Abused_Eve
Abused_Eve
Abused_Eve
Commented
Reminds me of a time when I didn't know what "brb" or other shorter versions of words meant.

Lianna declared before running into the bathroom with her clothes in hand to change, hearing Enverna mutter "what does 'BRB' mean?" behind her. 

Chosen By The Lover's Constellation

Chosen By The Lover's Constellation

LGBT+ · Already_In_Use

Abused_Eve
Replied to RelRel
some men call war an adventure.

She was tall, curvy, and a very kind person who had a lot of problems because she was the only girl in her family who wanted to be a beast tamer, but never once was there a girl beast tamer within the royal family, which only made it harder for her to even mention what she wanted to be since she didn't want to be laughed at, she was not like the other girls within her family, she loved learning to fight and going on adventures with her family, especially her father since he was one of the strongest beast tamer they knew.

Awakening of the Crimson Guardian

Awakening of the Crimson Guardian

Fantasy · Darkswan

Abused_Eve
Abused_Eve
Commented
should be "can" not "can't" would be negative

"My queen, you can't command us anything." One of the men said as she lowered his head.

Elspeth: Queen of Wolves

Elspeth: Queen of Wolves

Fantasy · Monachre

Abused_Eve
Commented
"The" not "he"

"The problem is how do I use this…" She thought about how she could use he wings to fly when it flapped and lifted her to the air.

Elspeth: Queen of Wolves

Elspeth: Queen of Wolves

Fantasy · Monachre

Abused_Eve
Replied to invayne
Your choice. And I'm not forcing you to do anything just pointing out my dislike of this thing since I see it too many times. Anyways good luck on writing this and like I said in review I did not dislike the novel. Have a good day.
img

The reason why Aiu and Eve did not detect this fact was because they were in a dormant state, and only when they came into contact with liquid like blood did they become active again. Eve also had no idea what implications this would have in the future.

Reborn As An A.I. With A System

Reborn As An A.I. With A System

Sci-fi · invayne

Abused_Eve
Replied to ChipWayman
That's nice way to say that someone has no abilities of there own.

This was all because of her breakthrough to the fourth level. She had been at the second level for quite some time and had gained a huge amount of experience from combat and training. Ming Yue understood that she was no genius and only hard work and persistence would help her. Not a single second was wasted. She always cultivated everyday, making her foundation very solid and practiced constantly. Coupled with the fact that her body had never experienced the efficacy of a cultivation plant, the effects of the Blood Lotus and the thunder roc blood doubled. Thus she was able to breakthrough two levels.

Maiden Of The Splitting Moon

Maiden Of The Splitting Moon

Fantasy · ARGAS

Abused_Eve
Replied to ChipWayman
Still not a good look, the dev of the site should make it easer then.

Ming Yue was somewhat surprised at Xiao Yin. She didn't think that she would have such a pet. She wouldn't have to worry about any assassins and be able to avoid any dangerous situations. Both man and beast were be hard pressed to try to ambush her.

Maiden Of The Splitting Moon

Maiden Of The Splitting Moon

Fantasy · ARGAS

Abused_Eve
Commented
needs fixing "but the flying and was able to scratch her arm when she was about to strike." don't understand what is going on here.

The feral within Chika seemed to get out as she went to kill the next one but the flying and was able to scratch her arm when she was about to strike.

Elspeth: Queen of Wolves

Elspeth: Queen of Wolves

Fantasy · Monachre

Abused_Eve
Commented
Isaki saunds like japanese name and Pedras sounds Like Lithuanian or Greek since both end with S letter and If the Pedras was Petras it would be full on Lithuanian name xD

A man dressed in white armor stands in the middle with a big smile on his face, he introduced himself as Isaki Pedras, a knight. His long sword in hand amazed everyone as he looks strong and promising.

Elspeth: Queen of Wolves

Elspeth: Queen of Wolves

Fantasy · Monachre

Abused_Eve
Abused_Eve
Abused_Eve
Abused_Eve
Abused_Eve
Replied to
I mean there is foreshadowing and straight up giving the information to people. You already had foreshadow by just having the guys point of view This is kind of just for the dummies. And yes I agree good story have foreshadowing.

The reason why Aiu and Eve did not detect this fact was because they were in a dormant state, and only when they came into contact with liquid like blood did they become active again. Eve also had no idea what implications this would have in the future.

Reborn As An A.I. With A System

Reborn As An A.I. With A System

Sci-fi · invayne

Abused_Eve
Commented
Lilly*?

"If you could do that, that would mean Tezz could go outside!" Lily was really looking forward to showing Tezz the outside world now!

Reborn As An A.I. With A System

Reborn As An A.I. With A System

Sci-fi · invayne

Abused_Eve
Commented
"could not control" maybe?

"Lilly, there is no need for that. It's fine. Sorry Tezz, I found you to be very cute and did not control myself." Eve apologized. She felt bad for the little bunny.

Reborn As An A.I. With A System

Reborn As An A.I. With A System

Sci-fi · invayne

Abused_Eve
Commented
Only few people needed to do it. out of 7 bil. pop. or so.

"I was thinking the same. But please keep the idea of betrayal in the back of your mind. We do not wish to be caught with our circuits out." Aiu did trust Lilly now that she had kept her promise, but she was still wary of humans betraying Eve. They had once already, and that resulted in her death. She did not know if the whole being reborn thing would ever happen again. And she, for one, did not wish to test it.

Reborn As An A.I. With A System

Reborn As An A.I. With A System

Sci-fi · invayne

Report user