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Jeremey_Shriner

Jeremey_Shriner

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I'm here for the plots more than the grammar, thankfully. 😅

2021-05-05 Joined United States

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Jeremey_Shriner
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Cael's teammates prepared for a fight, too. Myrna frantically rifled through her clothing. A couple of seconds later, she found and activated an amulet. An almost-transparent magical shield surrounded her. Niko pulled a strange device that looked like a tube with a handle—an entirely non-magical one—out of his many pockets. Tarek read a spell.

My Blood Mage System

My Blood Mage System

Fantasy · Garessta

Jeremey_Shriner
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bet there's a starspawn involved... could just be my prejudice against the church, though. 😅
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My Blood Mage System

My Blood Mage System

Fantasy · Garessta

Jeremey_Shriner
Commented
planes -> plains

The way wasn't long. As he passed, Cael noted differences between Nuvoloso lands and those of his own family. In many ways, they were the same: same planes and woods, rivers and fields, villages and towns.

My Blood Mage System

My Blood Mage System

Fantasy · Garessta

Jeremey_Shriner
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"Tsk." Ginevra pinched Cael's nipple slightly. A shocked gasp left his mouth. "Don't interrupt me."

My Blood Mage System

My Blood Mage System

Fantasy · Garessta

Jeremey_Shriner
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only 3 times.
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"A castle. Really? In the swamp? Won't the foundation sink?"

My Blood Mage System

My Blood Mage System

Fantasy · Garessta

Jeremey_Shriner
Jeremey_Shriner
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hello starspawn.

"It was a year ago—I was still a hatchling back then. Yes, we dragons age much faster than humans. The power fell to the ground like a comet that glowed in colors that have no names in human tongue, for you can't see them. It also glowed with mana that was, plainly put, not out of this world. It scared me. But Queen was enraptured. She took the comet and kept it on her person until her body absorbed its power."

My Blood Mage System

My Blood Mage System

Fantasy · Garessta

Jeremey_Shriner
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"Go. What, do you expect me to miss you?" was her answer.

My Blood Mage System

My Blood Mage System

Fantasy · Garessta

Jeremey_Shriner
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how to tell an actual good accountant, not spending excess money 👍

The doors of the audience hall opened, and in walked a man, tall and dry as a stick. Even his clothes were dark blue, too simple and unadorned for an official of his status. The only spot of color was a Mage's Mark he wore on his chest like a medal, and even that held no gemstones—only four silver studs set in copper.

My Blood Mage System

My Blood Mage System

Fantasy · Garessta

Jeremey_Shriner
Commented
large chair on a raised dais... isn't that literally a throne? 😅

The three of them stood in the Oliveira's audience hall, which was built right on the first lever of their tower. It was a grand place, built to awe and intimidate visitors. From the tall arched windows, midday sun threw golden stripes at the long red carpet that led straight to the lord's seat. Not a throne, but a large, towering chair on a raised dais.

My Blood Mage System

My Blood Mage System

Fantasy · Garessta

Jeremey_Shriner
Jeremey_Shriner
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Jeremey_Shriner
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my thought was now that he was cordial with him, he won't be able to get him to shut up 😅

He wasn't aware of it then, but he would come to realize later that he was making a huge mistake. 

Blessed by Night

Blessed by Night

Fantasy · AnathaShesha

Jeremey_Shriner
Replied to Demiwizard202
the bottom tier of feudal societies. basically, they are given land to work, but they don't own it and they have to give most of the produced goods/ money from selling it, to the noble that does own it.

I was also glad he wasn't scummy enough, within my expectations there was the small thought that he might try to kidnap me and turn me into an alchemist slave. It was a possible thing he could do, after all I was a serf kid who nobody would ever care aside from my parents, who had no strength, nor money.

Vampire Summoner's Rebirth: Summoning The Vampire Queen At The Start

Vampire Summoner's Rebirth: Summoning The Vampire Queen At The Start

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

Jeremey_Shriner
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venomous should be poisonous. venom is injected through an injury like a bite or sting, poison is ingested or inhaled.

Eleanora was a bit stubborn. The truth was, she was greedy deep down, but wasn't I also very greedy before? I might have become a bit less greedy, I guess. There are always people willing to buy anything, I am sure of it, but the chances of encountering someone willing to buy the corpse of a venomous walking mushroom in this little village was dim. I am sure it could be used for alchemy; I can see the potential in the materials by just looking, but it's not worth it, nor do I have any way to easily store it.

Vampire Summoner's Rebirth: Summoning The Vampire Queen At The Start

Vampire Summoner's Rebirth: Summoning The Vampire Queen At The Start

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

Jeremey_Shriner
Jeremey_Shriner
Replied to nvanattia
makes me think of the dr from demon lord retry when she cuts off the assassin clown's arms. 😅

Oh? I guess I can only learn survival-like Skills? Butcher is a very weird Skill to have, it is something just natural, can it even be used in battle?

Vampire Summoner's Rebirth: Summoning The Vampire Queen At The Start

Vampire Summoner's Rebirth: Summoning The Vampire Queen At The Start

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

Jeremey_Shriner
Replied to Cfmellow
that's assassination. 😅

Oh? I guess I can only learn survival-like Skills? Butcher is a very weird Skill to have, it is something just natural, can it even be used in battle?

Vampire Summoner's Rebirth: Summoning The Vampire Queen At The Start

Vampire Summoner's Rebirth: Summoning The Vampire Queen At The Start

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

Jeremey_Shriner
Replied to Red_dragon
also, the comma should be a semicolon; those are two complete sentences being put together.

This was an incredibly basic attack technique, which works as somewhat of a slashing weapon too. It is fairly cheap as well, can it last as long as you can keep it from shattering.

Vampire Summoner's Rebirth: Summoning The Vampire Queen At The Start

Vampire Summoner's Rebirth: Summoning The Vampire Queen At The Start

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

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