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yes but they break up for reasons you'll find out later

it was short lived

this reply to my review doesn't tell anyone anything anything, except that you do not know how to read and fully comprehend people's words and that you're a moron who prefers to think they know best when they know and understand nothing.

First off nothing even my earlier review can be taken as me being broke, infact I said the novels release rate is slow and I'd like to stack chapters and you assumed that I I was broke? did it ever occur to you that I may have already read all available chapters including privileged ones? The fact that the release rate is slow really has nothing to do with any of this but you decided to misconstrue my words. There's also the fact that some POVs in the novel are unecessary and that words means(just incase you're dumb enough not to know) that has not important relevance to the plot. for example as their team gets wiped out POVs change and the author changes to a pov of an unknown team member, one that was never mentioned before and will never be mentioned and then an entire paragraph is wasted on it instead of giving more 'screen time' to more important figures. That has nothing to do with giving Jake all the screen time or me wanting to see only Jake, Once again you misconstrue my words. Finally allowing the MC and his friends shine amongst their peers like I rightfully said has nothing to do with them being overpowered or unbeatable infact as of right now Jake is pretty overpowered him self and he has team mates that are also pretty OP, my point was the time between his power ups and beat downs were mostly too short not giving him enough time to get used to his new powers. That is not a bad review that is simply stating what happened in the novel and giving a constructive criticism. nothing I said in my review was false about the novel nor was I shit talking, I infact gave the novel the rating it deserves because this novel is just that good. I believe you might actually be a moron but I will give you the benefit of doubt.