Rowan_Jay

2yr

Replied to Nana_san

Thanks. I hope I figure it out too... you'd think they'd want me to upload???

ch 12 Scents

Rowan_Jay

2yr

Commented

Hello. Author here. For some reason, I cannot update "Magic in the Family". Webnovel's software won't allow me. I apologize for the inconvenience while I attempt to get to the bottom of this. I will aim to have a double update this Thursday. :(

ch 12 Scents

Rowan_Jay

2yr

Commented

It's been two paragraphs and I like this guy.

He had been walking along the Kaeje river for many days and his gray robes now looked dirty due to exposure to the elements. His robes along with his black eyes and messy black hair that tracked till his shoulders made him look like a disheveled beggar but Yin did not mind such things and kept moving along the river until he reached the outskirts of the town of Xian in Qing province. It was a forested area where a few second tier sects practiced cultivation arts.

Sovereign of the Gods

Eastern · Kalki_gsk

Rowan_Jay

2yr

Replied to Tiphereth

Haha. That's fair. No piece of writing is perfect, and subjective taste is valid. I'll update the chapter titles tomorrow. Thanks for the advice. Hope you'll stick around for Soren's story.

Magic in The Family

Fantasy · Rowan Jayy

Rowan_Jay

2yr

Commented

Creepy

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The Devil Under The Name Of God

Fantasy · 1AM

Rowan_Jay

2yr

Commented

Quick note on dialogue punctuation: , belong inside the dialogue tag. Wrong: "Please stop staring at me", he said, hiding his face behind his wings. Correct: "Please stop staring at me," he said, hiding his face behind his wings. A small thing, but it will make your grammar better. :)

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The Devil Under The Name Of God

Fantasy · 1AM

Rowan_Jay

2yr

Posted

An isekai with death leading to brutal penalties followed by a "re-load" back in time. Heavy focus on gore: if that's your thing, you'll find enjoyment here. After the first chapter, the writing quality picks up. Chapter one was hard to follow as the dialogue isn't tagged, there are too many unknown characters, and the scene has no context. However, once the second chapter hits, the scenes have flow, and the characters have both motivations and context. As of chapter seven, there doesn't seem to be a clear "main goal" beyond "complete quests to level up, and level up to complete quests." However, there are indications of larger powers at play.

The Impurity's Ascension

Urban · Tiphereth

Rowan_Jay

2yr

Commented

Yeah... I'd probably have the same reaction.

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The Impurity's Ascension

Urban · Tiphereth

Rowan_Jay

2yr

Replied to Tiphereth

Any suggestions on how I can increase my score?

Magic in The Family

Fantasy · Rowan Jayy

Rowan_Jay

2yr

Replied to Applelumi

Mom for the win!

However, the empress apparently had great hearing and managed to listen to their intentions,[You try to touch my son... And you better forget ever seeing the light of day again...]

A Hero for this Dragon

Fantasy · Breno_Ranyere

Rowan_Jay

2yr

Commented

Let's go, Mom!!

[Good! Don't move! I'll be done soon!] his mother declared, [Every single one of you better start praying to whatever gods you believe might save you now... You're going to need it!!]