thebountyhousebet

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Two whole chapters on him being confused is...a unique approach. Hopefully, he gets his current situation now, and is not on edge anymore 😅

ch 0 2 CHAPTER 2

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🤔There are Literally warnings on the first chapter about the less than perfect grammar of the novel. I Guess you missed that Or maybe you still didn't believe it and still gave a comment and Reviewed like you where tricked, it was pretty up front man.🤨

I'm Dating a stage (Real) Magician Girl from the Start!

Anime & Comics · FanFicsForFun_F4

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🤨If it ain't broke, don't fix it. Making appropriate changes to fit the new world is fine. But letting his ego float, and possibly ruin everything is stupid. Artistic integrity? What's that? can it be eaten? He has a plagiarist dream library for a cheat, just keep calm and profit.

The legendary original directors who had gone through storms and winds learned and carried big movies after a lot of flops, and finally, Ian was ready to take every risk so that he could learn and create something great of his own.

Hollywood King

Movies · TC_Liyanage1

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🤨Short? Your trolling right? It was a Bizarre end for a needlessly long arc. He had A million ways to cook her, but he chose the law. Fine, That's okay. She was found guilty, Cool. But then you incite her to kill herself using her kids as leverage, what?😮 What was the point of it all now? Why not do that from the start? Just extra steps to Keep your righteous indignation and reputation? It's not for so-called morals anymore, as that went out the minute you put the gun on the table. Now he's just as hypocritical as the heroes brainwashing people, after all that guff and smoke you gave others and refusing the consequences of ending true threats, (beyond joker level)your self keep your reputation. I don't think he's going down the villain route anymore, which makes this action even more frustrating for some readers, as it sometimes feels like the story is written as you go, with watery chapters not concise with no overall plan in mind.😔 Whatever, it's still a decent story, despite my gripes, I will read to see how this ends.🙂

ch 217 The End Of The Road #217

The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · Wicked132

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Taking random serums from strangers who lurk on you...😕 Novel intel -1

"I can do this," Esau said determinedly. "I don't need help."

Injustice: The Path To Hell (DC Comics)

Anime & Comics · Carrots123

thebountyhousebet

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🤔Didn't this Mc have a cheat of some sort before? why is he now taking broken DC super-soldier serums? Always being an apprentice to others is getting old, all those battles and he's still so childish, throwing tantrums. Hopefully, this arc has some character growth, both mentally and in mcs overall skill level🙂

"An enhancement serum." Deathstroke stated. "It will improve your mental capacity allowing you to think up to nine times faster than the average person. Enhance your reflexes, speed, stamina, strength, agility, senses, durability and even provide you with a regenerative ability. Certainty more than capable of getting rid of all those little wounds of yours."

Injustice: The Path To Hell (DC Comics)

Anime & Comics · Carrots123

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🤔On second thought, You know what, these are not bad plot points for a fan fiction route to take, I might as well make a fanfiction about this myself, so Author feel free to delete these comments 🙂

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1. sell the old faulty arc reactors Ivan can make cheaply for great amounts of cash by underground auction. 2. secretly Trademark the new element arc Reactor. 3. with money made selling old reactors to shady people buy the stark stock at its lowest during the press conference until you have more than 52%, 4. make genius tony work for you in unwillingness. success is the best revenge, that is if you don't want blood on the new Russian body's hands. Be a villain, but be an intelligent one, not a clown looking for validation from marvel plot characters.

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What? you Already died once, and that's WHY you should rightfully be clinging to life MC! your lack of concern comes off as having suicidal tendencies to appease these random super natural entities, one after the other, with no regard or caution for your suspiciously given new life you've been living. Mc is lacking, go with the flow, it's out of my hands, yes men type🤨 also the story rhythm seems weirdly off when reading🤔

I've already died once, why would I be afraid of that?

Hentai-Verse: Tales of a Milf Hunter

Anime & Comics · DontCallMeSimp

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mind blowing conclusion I never considered, simping=loss×2

That is a fact, think about it, Peter goes to the wrestling ring to get money so he could impress 'MJ', take the bitch out of the equation, uncle death is not the result with exceptions, Mj is indirectly involved with Ben's death, I know it sounds crazy but.. I'm not wrong.

Rise Of Venom [0]

Movies · Darkwolf280

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system is here to save this novel😀to give this too cool for school mc a purpose and direction for story development 😄

[Conditions for the System to be activated met.]

KanoKari: A Different Life

Anime & Comics · Addyctive7

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harem tag says your not🤥

He passed a few of the female servers, scantily clad as part of tonight's additional entertainment. He ignored the way their eyes roamed over his figure as even though some of them were old enough to be his mother and he was only sixteen, it was nothing more than a number to them. He could argue back that jail was only a room, especially in Gotham. But Esau liked to think that he was strong in the face of temptation.

Injustice: The Path To Hell (DC Comics)

Anime & Comics · Carrots123

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New training arc yeah...yea😑

[Training begins.]

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Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER

thebountyhousebet

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how many training arc's since the beginning of this novel man, just when I thought it was about to get bloody, training arc,new team, training arc, new world, training arc,new power, training arc, new collaboration, training Arc😑 enjoying the story, I just read from chapter 1 till this chapter without breaks, but In my reading I noticed this pattern, but I'm still reading 🙂

I had waited long enough already, and seeing I had lost some of my power, it was best to find a way to compensate for that loss, if anything, to ensure Superman had no chance when the time came.

DC: DON'T UTTER A WORD

Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER

thebountyhousebet

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all of a sudden he's name dropping like a mother-,but doesn't seem recognize raven at all, is it the lack of jewelry on forehead, origin story, is it the birth of the Teen Titans 🤔 then that makes sense and is exciting development 😊

Regrettably, for me, I didn't have Doctor Fate's number, or Constantine's for that matter, the two heavy hitters of the league when it came to dealing with demonic entities.

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Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER

thebountyhousebet

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MC has past life memories, he should eventually know she's raven, right? She is fairly famous even to relaxed fans, or else this is hugely inconsistent with the setting of the story, having MC know less famous Black Canary background, but not knowing Raven is a serious plot hole; as Mc knows robins secret identity on sight thus he should have some knowledge of raven, who is a big part of Robins life in teen titans. So please don't make the Mc 4th wall blind all of a sudden, that's really hard to see as a reader. Maybe am being over-sensitive, I hope.🙂 Ps: also I prefer starfire, give your character some edge and have him NTR Robin for that previously stunt that nearly killed him😈

ch 34 CHAPTER 30

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Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER

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logical statement, Novel Int+1

"Moreover, if he does we are all going to die with him. Do you think the Emperor of Kinley will spare our lives? Either he will kill us or make us slaves." She spoke and started walking towards the bed.

The Imbecile Lord Is Married to Five Beautiful Goddess

Fantasy · Mohitkumar

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🤔her influence was growing bigger than her assigned position, so

The Knight Christina who was also known as the goddess of war on the battlefield became the Fourth fiancee by the Emperor's order.

The Imbecile Lord Is Married to Five Beautiful Goddess

Fantasy · Mohitkumar

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cliche means it's concept that it's a battle and time tested as the best optimal choice accepted by the Masse's over time. it works 👍

It took him a few seconds to process this, but once he did, he couldn't help thinking to himself, "Isn't this too cliche?"

With My System, I Can Even Tame Gods

Fantasy · DXHaseoXD

thebountyhousebet

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WTH! why does he know her name? does he know her identity from the start from his old world, did he just recall about her after waking up, or is this the authors mistake- *reading further to find out*😳

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Anime & Comics · TotherWindow1

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