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fascinating.

lovinggg the quirkiness of yohanna! such a fun character. waiting to read moreeee <3 <3 <3 also, a question; how did this plot come about? what is this yohanna-world inspired from?

this writer has come a long way since writing her first book - a better overall sentence structure and a complexer plot and characters, and the most important, chapter lenght!!😂 but she still has miles to go.i can definitely see a potential for improving some choice of words here and there and the fast paced-ness of the book. but your thought process steals the show! 'dad ran away with an adult star' loll who would've thought, it genuinely made me crack up (even though it wasn't intentional :p) keep up the good work, can't wait to know what lies ahead of yohanna⚡.