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Hello Mighty Customer here! 😁 The idea for this novel is interesting but let me tell you some point that might help. 1. Keep eng grammer on mark. Give a healthy amount of First Person & Third Person POV. 2. Don't make this a Gotta Catch em all Harem 🤕 Novel. 1 or 2 love interest at most. 3. The Idea of Sandbox is already way Overpowered, So don't immediately make him a Super Duper Uber God. The sheer possibilities of Sandbox are limitless. 4. You can blend Scifi & magic genre together in this I guess. 5. Maybe you can also add different world travel element in this novel. 6. Also MOST IMPORTANT: Don't make the MC a dense, beta and a dumb idiot kind of guy. This just ruins the story and character development can hardly work here sometimes. I hope the points i made to help u don't discourage u. The idea is gr8 and i hope you can create a Gem out of this. [img=recommend]

Thanx for reviewing my comment Author-san.

The story premise is promising, So kudos to author on that.There is a small issue that i find daunting. It seems like the story is written using ChatGPT. There are sentences written in the story that are written with too many words.Like author inserts so many big complex words in simple sentences to increase word count and in turns it becomes irritating for me. Still i liked Author's story. Hope this helps author to improve. [img=recommend]

Man this story has some Crazy good potential and I would really like if Author got to releasing more chapters ASAP [img=update]. Hopefully we get Mass Release with stable pacing of the story as it is now. [img=coins]

It would be good if its not a forced relation without any buildup of connection btw MC and Girl. Also the girl should have actual character not some annoying character. Also dont make it a big ass harem, maybe 1 or 2 should be okay. [img=recommend]

The story pacing is good but it would be nice to have more chapters. So the author is hereby requested to drop many chapters immediately [img=update]. The way MC is shown overpowered is good but it would be good if he doesn't become cringey arrogant MC. Kudos to your story

This has a nice feel good vibe with isekai fantasy content. Hope to get more Serene adventures in this life of hers . Few fighting scenes could be added with more fight design but with the overall pacing of the story it is good for now. [img=recommend] Lets hope Author-Sama have more good story ideas for this .[img=update]