aryan_Sharma

2mth

Replied to Brobeast

bold of you to assume you will have gf?

"Because that bitch Selvia doesn't deserve him."

The supporting character's harem is very normal

Fantasy · HikaruKiki

aryan_Sharma

4mth

Commented

tftc

ch 0 1 Out of the loop.

Villain's Contract With The God

Fantasy · Satan03

aryan_Sharma

6mth

Commented

thanks for the chapter

ch 24 Burn along in hell with me

Rich Villain of the Ruined World

Urban · DevilDarkness

aryan_Sharma

6mth

Commented

thanks for the chapter

ch 22 Rise of the villain

Rich Villain of the Ruined World

Urban · DevilDarkness

aryan_Sharma

6mth

Commented

thanks for the chapter

ch 21 Is this... Still a cliff?

aryan_Sharma

6mth

Commented

thanks for the chapter

ch 18 This Prince Shouldn't Be Ignored

aryan_Sharma

6mth

Replied to DevilDarkness

are you going merge two storylines?

ch 19 Kill Ali Parker

Rich Villain of the Ruined World

Urban · DevilDarkness

aryan_Sharma

6mth

Posted

its good . you should give it a try...........................................................................................................................................................................................

aryan_Sharma

6mth

Replied to DevilDarkness

1.Arrogant Young Master Template A Variation 4 2.Tree of Aeons these 2 novels were one of my early reads .. these 2 have most character depth and world building and style .. with slow progression.(especially the 2nd one). In a good way your story has potential and you are using it . but writing is a bit rough . like dialogue between characters. If you have time try these novels on "royalroad". and thanks for writing this story..

Life Of A Nobody - as a Villain

Fantasy · DevilDarkness

aryan_Sharma

6mth

Posted

generally slow paced novels are considered demerit's but for this novel author took time to explore the characters personality. It has stability of updates . as for story development it passes with 5/5.As for world background, we are still learning about the world .as it would be revealed later .

Life Of A Nobody - as a Villain

Fantasy · DevilDarkness

aryan_Sharma

6mth

Posted

its good novel. it keeps balance between logic and story progression. it has lot of potential for improvement . for example switching pov more often or increasing dialogs between characters.

aryan_Sharma

7mth

Replied to RisenTan

do you know reason why it spottedupdating?

Rebirth Of The Villainous Crown Prince

Eastern · ZinonWonder

aryan_Sharma

7mth

Replied to xyz_zyx_1030

Rebirth Of The Villainous Crown Prince

Eastern · ZinonWonder

aryan_Sharma

7mth

Replied to Reza2000

Rebirth Of The Villainous Crown Prince

Eastern · ZinonWonder

aryan_Sharma

8mth

Posted

its good you should give it a try>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Villain: Manipulating the Heroines into hating the Protagonist

Eastern · Evil_Villain

aryan_Sharma

9mth

Posted

keep it up i like it.......................................................................................................

I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata.

Fantasy · ForManaga

I did some writing on the side to see if my writing quality is up to par with how it previously was, and I'm feeling confident again so I feel like I could resume this one. Again, if you're still one of the readers who are still reading this after more than a year of no updates, I will do my best to write quality chapters to make up for it.